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4/8/24, 7:50 PM
It still has me wondering what's next. I never realized how bearish Eric is. MMM, leather daddy bear sounds lovely.

4/10/24, 10:13 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I love a good sexy bear so I usually envision my characters as some sort of bear/dadbod/beef cake. But if the physical description doesn't really effect the story than I sometimes leave it vague. I like being able to envision my own preferences on characters so I try to explained that to my readers.

4/11/24, 2:31 AM
@[Cargo Cub](/user/show/10027653) Sounds good. I imagine them both in many ways.
4/11/24, 12:54 AM
Excuse the repeat of words, but the choices are ambiguous haha. Mistakes are just choices with regrets of some form in hindsight. I guess based on the story this far, mistakes (whether just regretting not to see Ethan, or casting a curse on another warlock, or something untold and even more chaotic 😈) sounds like a more reasonable conclusion than choices, which would imply a happy ending, especially when compared to the other option. I'd personally love to see what it was like from Kals perspective at the start. Loosing his otherwise reality controlling powers and becoming a toxic alpha, slave to his own dick, not that he'd see it that way 😂

4/11/24, 2:17 AM
@[Rapids](/user/show/1149812) I did consider a spin-off chapter from Kal’s PoV, but it would be outside of the main story, and likely include more straight sex than I want to write. I might write that interlude eventually, but one thing I like is how defined a character Kal is by his absence. In the first 7 chapters, Kal is in 2 of them, but his choices and mistakes (hah) and natural inclinations towards man-sex are more important to the story than any other character other than Brad, and I think it’s a toss up as to if Kal or Brad are more important.
4/11/24, 12:19 AM
This series has been an absolute delight to read. Every new chapter just adds more buildup towards the end and they make me grow more excited to see the ~~depraved~~ ending. I'm actually one of the few who likes Drake's mind tricks. I hope Brad picks up one or two from him :p
4/10/24, 10:42 PM
Jack, you always make it totally believable. Theo and Felix. Now what will Felix encourage Theo to do next.
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4/10/24, 10:26 PM
Can't wait for more. Please don't be the end of the story. It can't end here.
Anonymous
4/10/24, 6:27 AM
I don't know how I somehow missed this series after loving the original 0_o Def agree with Tanners92 about Eric's size, especially if Eric loves the attention! Can't wait to read the next installment, these are a delight to read!

4/10/24, 10:16 PM
@Anonymous Thank you for the kind words! I don't really like where I left the first series but I didn't really have a plan for that one and I wasn't sure where to go next. This story has a decent outline for the foreseeable future so it should continue for a while.
4/10/24, 1:00 AM
I can’t wait to see what happens with Peter when he joins the story. Any chance Eric’s cock gets shrunk? Big muscles small cock.

4/10/24, 10:14 PM
@[tanners92](/user/show/963694) I do like that idea, but I've got some scenes I want to do with him at his current size first.. maybe a small chastity cage would be a good compromise to humble the himbo..
4/10/24, 8:48 PM
Wow, wow, wow. How to choose? And you could argue that either choices or mistakes can yield good or bad endings. Choose poorly and disaster can result. But we can learn from our mistakes and be better than before. So which is correct?

4/10/24, 9:49 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I would add that no one intends to make mistakes, but how do you know which of your choices is a mistake? And if your 'mistake' helps you learn or if it makes you a better man, was it a mistake at all? They are two sides of the same coin, right?

4/10/24, 10:01 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) exactly. But the fact that this chapter ends with Brad needing Ethan gives me hope that regardless his ‘choice’, the ending will be positive.
4/10/24, 7:48 PM
I was so worried for a second that the bad ending would involve Drake, because tbh, im hating his character. So now im curious how would the story diverge. Im still on team Throuple btw. Edit: im impressed that he learned a lesson from his mistake. In that it will have an impact oh his decision/story ending. Team jock Brad being with his Daddy and Bro.

4/10/24, 9:42 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Well, Drake is very easy to hate. I think I hate him too. He may still have a role to play, however.
4/10/24, 9:40 PM
This just gets better and better! Can’t wait for the next chapter!