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4/11/24, 8:51 PM
This is definitely the weirdest story I've ever read, here or anywhere else. I enjoyed it though. Crapping out your brains is new, too, as so many happy people around here have ejaculated or peed their mind out, but I can't remember anyone messing their diaper with it.... Cruel and fun!
4/11/24, 7:45 PM
Excellent series. The fact that you had me rooting *against* a transformation into a bimbo femboy is a testament to your writing! But maybe Brad can keep that version of himself around for later 👀 Mistakes sounds more fun!
4/11/24, 4:48 PM
Based on the description I was so looking forward to this. But I found it really hard to read. Not in the staring into the ringmaster eyes fun sort of way either.

4/11/24, 4:51 PM
@[PJ34](/user/show/2558338) I'm sorry to hear that! For the sake of constructive criticism, was it the themes present in the tale or the actual prose of the story? Thanks for the feedback!

4/11/24, 6:44 PM
@[Tom Gungy](/user/show/129727) It was the referring to lots of things as kanada. By the time I got to the circus I was confused and who and what was who and what. Sorry!!!!!

4/11/24, 7:07 PM
@[PJ34](/user/show/2558338) No need for apologies! I was worried I went in a little hard on that niche. It’ll be a great thing to learn from. Thank you so much!

4/11/24, 7:32 PM
@[Tom Gungy](/user/show/129727) 👍👍👍
offeringservice26
4/11/24, 4:56 PM
Hmm. I don’t usually leave critical feedback, but this chapter seemed strange to me. I really like the premise of this story, and I thought the first chapter was hot, but I missed having a little bit more descriptive sex scenes in this chapter. It came across to me like “He sucked my dick. Then he sucked my dick again. Then he licked my feet. Then my friend came over and fucked him. Then he licked my feet again. Then a bunch of my friends came over and fucked him 10 times.” Sorry to be negative about it but I thought this one had a lot of potential after the first chapter.
4/11/24, 3:45 PM
Choices maketh the man. The choice to accept ones mistakes and learn from them, to choose to be better.
4/11/24, 3:28 PM
Well, I hadn’t considered a “Door #3” option. But I guess it’s up to what’s behind #1 & #2. Lol. Can’t wait.
4/11/24, 7:50 AM
The plot thickens! I am still hoping they end up perversely happy. A long weekend, spring break, summer, christmas, long may this story continue 🤣

4/11/24, 3:11 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Heh maybe I'll have to do some special holiday "episodes" at some point. Maybe stuffing Chris for thanksgiving 😜
Anonymous
4/11/24, 2:22 PM
I wrote a longer comment that got eaten by the void so all I'm going to say is Holy fuck. Both endings please, and a third secret ending you havent even hinted at, please and thank you
eagerboy415
4/11/24, 1:55 PM
Team mistakes here. One final pitfall Brad can’t escape
4/11/24, 10:54 AM
Will this story be finished???