Recent Comments

4/10/24, 4:20 AM
I love this chapter and the world building of it all. Onyx, the smarmy little bastard, has grown on me a fair bit. I especially appreciate the fact that despite being a snide brat he is rather sharp. He seems to be the one holding everyone accountable, and I rather liked his psychoanalysis on dear Jaime. I cant help but feel as though Dusk definitely has some idealized version of Jaime in his head. Looking forward to the next installation!
Anonymous
4/10/24, 2:19 AM
It's there another part to this amazingly hot story? I hope this story continues.
4/9/24, 5:06 PM
Woohoo! What an exciting conclusion! Can't wait to see what a bunch of gay musclefreak giants get up to on their own private tropical island!

4/9/24, 9:45 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) I'm sure they'll be fine until the computer system that cannot fail does, the security system goes offline, and the exhibits start attacking the guests...

4/10/24, 1:18 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) The *real* question is, will the security system fail because a disgruntled employee will disable it in an attempt to steal some of the hyper cum to sell to a shady businessman (and get transformed himself in the process)?
4/9/24, 8:09 PM
Thanks for all the awesome parts until here! Is there any chance of you continuing the story one day? :)

4/9/24, 11:34 PM
@[Myungen](/user/show/1449938) I may finish it someday. Part of the next chapter is already written. Just need to have more time to work on it.

4/10/24, 1:03 AM
@[RubberRoswell](/user/show/908893) Wow, that’s really delightful news! Looking forward to it. Take care and happy writing times!
4/9/24, 12:55 PM
Really like this and I assume there are more stories behind it. Like who created the computer, who was the Drone 1, where were the other drones, were they all real soldiers or also victims with different backgrounds. All are mysterious and developmental. Wish the story could be continued :)

4/10/24, 12:29 AM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) There is a lot more background that answers some of the questions you have but not all of them and at some point I might write more but we'll have to see, until then, let your mind wonder.
Hurricane
4/9/24, 11:09 PM
Love this story so much, it tickles so many of my fanatsies. I've been waiting for this chapter and I'm so happy because it was even better than I was expecting

4/10/24, 12:26 AM
@[Hurricane](/user/show/1255929) Very cool, I'm glad to tickle your fantasies and better, can I ask which part? Maybe I'll try and hit them again...
4/10/24, 12:19 AM
Oh man I've been reading you for years. I've been having a dry spell (lol) of ideas and stories, but your story made me laugh in the middle of SF and then hot. Double whammy!
4/9/24, 11:45 PM
Such a sexy chapter to reread! Love the way he makes them his.
Anonymous
4/9/24, 9:37 PM
Onyx embezzled from the League? I think that raises questions on what Onyx's original power was. . . I think of it as interesting
4/9/24, 8:49 PM
Great beginning! Please continue if you ever have the time for it! :)