This just gets better and better! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

And so it begins. This chapter was an interesting look into the world of the landed knights, in this case Frederick. I was expecting Frederick to be akin to a knight who was corrupted by material wealth and power, but as we see here that isn't the case. It's clear he has deep regrets for what happened to Collin, and cares about Tristan. The opening chapter where Gregory and William are bantering about with each other is soft in its humor. Here are the two men who were once separated come together anew- amidst their banter- still incredibly lewd banter but banter still. Yet at the same time, the insidious want they have to corrupt others is present. Even if they believe it's for the best (and it definetly seems like abuses influcted upon the knights are a major reason for Gregory's corruption at least), that is somewhat terrifying. The implications collin and Gregory were sent on suicide missions is chilling. If that's what they're willing to do with respected individuals- either they are really lacking manpower or have grown cruel themselves- being at the beck and mercy of the nobility- which Gregory alluded to. William on the other hand crying when he hears about collin from Frederick was also another nice touch. It highlights that despite being transformed, he isn't exactly gone. That he even went out of his way to comfort Frederick was pretty surprising. There's really nothing in it for him to do so. That his motivation to change Frederick changed to make him feel happy and guilt free is yet again another showcasing of his kindness. On the other hand, Frederick essentially trying to drown Tristan with contaminated wine was rather scary. Frederick had enough control to stop that and clearly feels guilt but I seriously hope the corruption doesn't make him try that on Tristan again. I'm suprised that William didn't kill the messenger birds- but it makes sense- he doesn't seem the type to kill unless he needs to. And now with Tristan getting transformed (who also seems to have the hots for frederick)- this is about to get complicated fast. After that, it's likely the whole fiefdom that will fall under next. On the other hand, there is something tragic about how William says Collin would want them to be happy. If Collin somehow managed to survive and remain human, him running into William and the others is going to be right out of his worst nightmares. Or you know, he could be dead. Which I think would haunt them both. Though, I do wonder something. Considering how strong the saliva and ejaculate the demons are emitting, won't somebody eventually notice it? They can try to disguise themselves and that works in terms of appearence, but if somebody tries to clean their room people might start noticing things (cleaning crew or janitorial staff etc). Or did they work a safeguard for that?

Would be great to see this one developed more!

This is a fun little hot story... but it must not end here!

Oddly felt things ended just as got started. So much set up and enjoyable developing at the beginning then after the Budd explosion and senator met son ..I thought going to expand a bit more as the men got to know each other or went back or whatever. Transition to who now going to be and enjoy settling in. What's here is nice. Just feels a little anti climactic. We had this hot ensemble cast each mixing it up in a formula introduction with a wider conflict to drive interest as you did the " boring " day to day stuff (who is the bad kid, how will the ranch heads finesse their foe, will they give up the client, what that like or result in. Getting to see the staff and activities of the ranch or just changes to town and folk and what made) and then the changes and the enjoyment and then. .. Whoop all home plus summary of how it all worked out. Thing is the intimacy and build through IS great. The transition good too. But it's like things abruptly end for the hyper giant thing. Which feels...off. It was set up. But part of the disappointment is I liked the budds for their familiarity. Checking in was a treat as was their dynamic threats to their valued status quo some internal, others external. So felt it would be crisp when they'd get to respond or receive the rewards of the plan they implemented and pleasing to see how working that. Though i suppose not much else fresh to cover. Christian's obviously getting his comeuppance. Keywon got to indulge his bottomness. Gangly grew. Smokey got wild. etc. Just felt had a nice deliberate pace and build up and in the zone then to play through entertaining procedural. And now its over. I suppose" want more," especially as promised to build on somethings you are eager to explore is a good thing to feel at an ending. Well. I would rate this story overall an adjusted 3 on balance for writing. 4 on ideas and setting development. 3.5 characters. A nice spread we got to see play off into the build up Hotness is an obvious 4, thanks to many qualities. variety, character and interaction, setting, distinct voices, unique challenges, and goals and results offered offered in how came together. Mind control. To me the twisty seduction and mental effects permeate. More a feel than a specific thing. Used well save where a little abridged. So a decent experience with an abrupt if happy end

My CHOICE is both. This is two good a series to end with one ending. It deserves both.

DON'T YOU DARE DENY US FROM A GOOD AND HAPPY ENDING FILLED WITH DOMINANT AND LOVING ETHAN AND SAMIR! I may have got a tincy bit emotionally involved with the characters of this story. I admit I was afraid this chapter would end on a bad cliff hanger (morality wise, not quality wise), but damn, the righteous fury scene was absolutely worth it. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Experience is the name we give our mistakes. So my vote goes to mistakes

Absolutely fantastic story. Love horse anthros and bulging jock transformations!

mistakes pls