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4/10/24, 12:19 AM
Oh man I've been reading you for years. I've been having a dry spell (lol) of ideas and stories, but your story made me laugh in the middle of SF and then hot. Double whammy!
4/9/24, 11:45 PM
Such a sexy chapter to reread! Love the way he makes them his.
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4/9/24, 9:37 PM
Onyx embezzled from the League? I think that raises questions on what Onyx's original power was. . . I think of it as interesting
4/9/24, 8:49 PM
Great beginning! Please continue if you ever have the time for it! :)
4/9/24, 8:07 PM
So fucking hot, this entire series. I imagine myself as Kevin, as Sirs faggot slut. Being trained and dominated. Amazing! Love it
4/9/24, 6:47 PM
Been looking forward to this update and it’s definitely worth the wait! Really, REALLY love the continuation of Dunc’s cum-lock and the effects it has on his psyche and overall obedience. I just love athletic jocks being teased and edged like this. Young jocks are usually virile and sexually active, and so for someone like Dunc to be depraved and totally controlled in such a way is just completely titillating to me. And you do such a great job in capturing Dunc’s frustrated thoughts and feelings during his cum-lock ordeal. Personally, I wouldn’t mind if Dunc stays like this, he can be a lax-bro fuck toy, a living dildo who doesn’t ejaculate haha. At the very least, I hope Mr. Mandrake keeps his ejaculations at a very bare minimum and it kinda make sense narratively too, since lax-bros are probably more obedient the more horny and frustrated they are! The stuff with the wrestlers are also quite interesting too, btw, but Dunc’s cum-lock journey is definitely the star of the show for me. Anyway, really awesome chapter once again and thank you for posting for us. It’s been such a TREAT!
4/9/24, 4:44 PM
Great story and when u get the step brothers involved it can go anywhere hope u continue it
4/9/24, 4:22 PM
Great start! Love your stories
4/9/24, 3:33 PM
Very well executed and HOT! I loved the changes happening one at a time, and the mental change at the end was the icing on the cake.