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4/9/24, 2:43 AM
I know they're AI but the pictures help with the epilogue.
4/7/24, 11:49 PM
So happy to see this chapter! And I am so thrilled in how this chapter preludes to the what is about to happen. Clearly Jamie isn't just wanted, he is needed. It adds so much more depth to his value and how things go from here. So now the big question is, how and when will he be turn?

4/8/24, 3:11 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) I don't know that "turn" is the right word for what will happen with Jamie. This Interlude makes it pretty clear that Master and his drone henchmen will actively try to bring Jamie in, though it also suggests their first choice method remains persuasion. So maybe "be turned" might be the better verb tense here. Then there's the League's intent to try and interfere with Master acquiring Jamie, to try and apprehend him or some of his drones. How will that play out?

4/9/24, 12:36 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) Yeah, I clearly didn't proof read what I wrote. I think this is either going one of two ways. One Jamie switches sides. He gets some more personal time with Dusk, keeps getting worked at the gym, and souring towards the Tribunal more and more. Though Dusk will have his work cut out for him, because Onyx is right to a point. The other is that Jamie is apprehended by the league and we get to see what the Tomb is. Either way, Luxor remains a mole and his conversion is much slower.
3/31/24, 5:16 AM
Your edit has been approved. Please chck the paragraphs at the end, they are "a bit" long.

3/31/24, 5:19 AM
@[Pup Vince](/user/show/10023016) Did they all combine on your end? They look separated to me on my view.

Zander
4/1/24, 7:10 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I also wonder when there will be a continuation of the story about desires? Where the unfaithful man is controlled and his husband is invited to watch it in the office where the orgy is going on?

4/1/24, 8:06 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) It’s also in the works! After I finish this, I’m gonna focus on my commissioned story, but Sinfulfillment will be finished. I’m proud of what I have in store.

4/2/24, 8:09 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) It was an issue on my side only, sorry!

Anonymous
4/6/24, 10:00 PM
@[EdIam] The dumbing down of the twins, now triplets, is the most exciting thing ont this story to me. I like that they sound very stupid, not just slow minded, word-limited or with the simple "duhh," they sound utterly stupid talking the way they do now. The use of childish words is a good touch, I like they say "happy juice", "poopy", or "pee-pee", that language makes them sound like complete morons. I like where you're taking Fred, I like that after being changed he's very good looking, and yet the family despises him. Im curious about the ending

Anonymous
4/9/24, 12:27 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) What’s next!
CHT
4/9/24, 12:17 AM
This story is so hot ... love that he is aware of everything that is happening
Anonymous
4/8/24, 11:57 PM
I live to serve the Virus :smiling_imp:
4/8/24, 11:03 PM
Amazing Epilogue!

4/8/24, 11:27 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I’m a fan of the prologue/ epilogue. I’ve been in a debate about this online. Some writers hate them, claim no one reads them. I think it’s a great way to say goodbye to characters. I’m glad you liked it!
4/8/24, 9:40 PM
Ain't this the dream, eh? Wonderful work so far. Looking forward to more.
Anonymous
4/8/24, 4:19 PM
Simple but effective as any Drone should be!

4/8/24, 9:00 PM
@Anonymous Exactly 😈
4/8/24, 2:16 PM
I didn't see that twist coming, very good

Pcm
4/8/24, 2:38 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Thank you again for commenting! I'm really happy that people are interested in the series. Can I ask if there are any parts in particular that you like, or if some parts drag on a bit too long? Anyway, thabk you so much!

4/8/24, 2:57 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I like how the corruption just twisted the knights, instead of rewrite them

Pcm
4/8/24, 3:12 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Thank you! I usually find coeeuption stories hotter that way.
Apr 6, 2024
Anonymous
4/8/24, 12:46 PM
read this through without looking at the images and it was super hot… went back and read along with the art work and it was glorious!!!

Anonymous
4/8/24, 1:12 PM
@Anonymous Glad you liked it! Thank you

4/8/24, 1:14 PM
@Anonymous LOL I forgot to log in, reply was by me !