Recent Comments

4/9/24, 6:47 PM
Been looking forward to this update and it’s definitely worth the wait! Really, REALLY love the continuation of Dunc’s cum-lock and the effects it has on his psyche and overall obedience. I just love athletic jocks being teased and edged like this. Young jocks are usually virile and sexually active, and so for someone like Dunc to be depraved and totally controlled in such a way is just completely titillating to me. And you do such a great job in capturing Dunc’s frustrated thoughts and feelings during his cum-lock ordeal. Personally, I wouldn’t mind if Dunc stays like this, he can be a lax-bro fuck toy, a living dildo who doesn’t ejaculate haha. At the very least, I hope Mr. Mandrake keeps his ejaculations at a very bare minimum and it kinda make sense narratively too, since lax-bros are probably more obedient the more horny and frustrated they are! The stuff with the wrestlers are also quite interesting too, btw, but Dunc’s cum-lock journey is definitely the star of the show for me. Anyway, really awesome chapter once again and thank you for posting for us. It’s been such a TREAT!
4/9/24, 4:44 PM
Great story and when u get the step brothers involved it can go anywhere hope u continue it
4/9/24, 4:22 PM
Great start! Love your stories
4/9/24, 3:33 PM
Very well executed and HOT! I loved the changes happening one at a time, and the mental change at the end was the icing on the cake.
Apr 6, 2024
4/9/24, 1:04 PM
This was fantastic, really enjoyed the images to go with the story, they helped to visualise it. And the changes were very hot. Great work!

4/9/24, 1:16 PM
@[Growing Geek](/user/show/129818) Thank you! I am glad you liked it :)
4/9/24, 5:21 AM
Some great plot twists in this epilogue! I especially liked how you brought back Tucker from the original FanTCDude story at the end--it felt like a post-credits scene from a Marvel movie. I do wish we'd gotten a bit more mental transformation stuff in the last couple of chapters to help set up these endings; it felt like the action suddenly ramped into overdrive, and we didn't get as many of those character psychology moments you do so well.

4/9/24, 11:36 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) > it felt like a post-credits scene from a Marvel movie. That was what I was going for. I should've labeled it better... As to the main body of your comment -- I agree. This is a result of "Pantsing" -- making it up as you go along. I realized suddenly that I was at the end of what I wanted to do with the "plot" and even though I could've squeezed out another couple of chapters, personally, I'm ready to move on. It's been 3 months with this story -- I really want to get to my next project. For the middle movie of the trilogy, it's not bad. I feel like I got good traction at the end. I've left most of these stories open-ended in case I want to jump in and do something with them (one-shots or something) -- we'll see. Not my best, far from my worst. At least I see a future for the franchise.

4/9/24, 12:58 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) I'm the same way when it comes to writing longer stories. I start off doing the slow build with simmering tension, but at some point I just want to finish the damn story already, and so sometimes I'll speed things up towards the end. (My cardinal sin is fast-forwarding through sex scenes, since I don't find them very interesting to write).
Hinner
4/9/24, 4:45 AM
The AI images... They're a real turn off for me, they were especially at the beginning, had to read the first chapters on metabods even. But I get that some people like them and you probably do too, or you wouldnt put them in the first place. If you could make them optional by putting them behind a link or something like it next time would make the experience much better for me, and probably other people too. (I've seen other authors do it in this site). The story is flawless as usual though!

4/9/24, 11:28 AM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) I inserted the pics because I thought it'd be fun. As you note, other authors do it and, like everybody probably, I've been playing with an AI generator. (I collect morphed images, as well.) Sorry you didn't feel it was successful.

4/9/24, 12:08 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) You mentioned Metabods in your comment and I want to share a quick bit. On this site, including the epilogue, there have been 14K views and 136 comments (as of 4/9/24). On metabods, (where the epilogue will not be available until Saturday, 4/13) there have been over 20K views, but only 2 comments. Guess what makes me happier -- views or comments?
4/9/24, 3:41 AM
My dude, my man, this has been something else, hasn't it? I mean, having a character get "Tuckered" out, as it has been referred to, must be such a difficult thing. Keeping the reader's attention throughout the transformation, never letting up even as words grow poorer and poorer at explicating the sheer, staggering masculine size that must be so clear in your mind's eye. But you mange to do it. Over and over. Even in several spurts in this "b-ranch" of the story. Thank you for sharing your skill, especially in this story, but also generally. I feel blessed that I've gotten to follow your work over the years. I'll light one in your honor on 420 Absman. And again, thank you for sharing your skill with the world.

4/9/24, 11:22 AM
@[Tresser](/user/show/969723) "Tuckered Out" is funny -- I'm gonna steal that. Thank you for sharing my really weird fetish.
4/9/24, 4:54 AM
I loved this! Shifting perspectives over the course of a 3000 word story doesn't always work, but it totally paid off here and only added to the sense of suspense and anticipation. I can see all kinds of ways that you might continue this story--maybe from the perspective of a friend who doesn't understand why Chris and Steven are acting so differently and have suddenly joined ROTC. I hope you do!

4/9/24, 5:36 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thank you, it's good to know that shifting from Steven to Chris to Drone 14 and back paid off and made it a better story. And while I can't say I won't ever make another part to this-PT with Coach was mean to be a one off and so was Crossroad Club but they aren't staying that way so we'll see what happens.