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4/8/24, 1:20 AM
In about 5000 words, you've laid out the basic premise, introduced us to some characters and gave us a semblance of their personalities, and left all of us salivating for more! Very well done and well-written, and I know I'm eagerly awaiting to see what happens between Damien and Bruce. I would say keep up the great work, Casual, but I know you always do so! :wink:

4/8/24, 7:34 AM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Such a lovely comment! Thank you, Franco. 😊
4/8/24, 2:48 AM
I must concur with every other commenter on here, and I need to kick myself for missing out on such an outrageously hot story when it first released! Insanely well-written, gets all the key points across while maintaining a light and informal tone, and the subtle transformation of Oliver was masterful and natural. Very well done!
4/7/24, 12:32 PM
Loved the story!! Also, is it just me or does Andrew's voice **in bold text** seem like the Voice from Dune? 🤭

4/8/24, 1:27 AM
@[Blue_Ancora](/user/show/910101) Thanks! I haven’t seen Dune yet but I’ve been told it’s worth the watch. I’ve never really thought about how I interpret Andrew’s voice sounding like when he uses magic.
4/7/24, 11:40 PM
It's a fascinating story which I enjoyed reading. It was slightly too... clinical? I think, is the right word? This detracted from the eroticism somewhat but it did fit the story very well.
4/7/24, 11:15 PM
At last! Seems like we've been waiting forever. But it's a good one.
4/7/24, 8:55 PM
💚💚💚💚
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4/7/24, 4:07 PM
brilliant chapter and great chapter… loved the Budd brothers story and the way it was tied up… the senator and his son was fantastic story (and a bit of an open ending)… great that the supporting cast all got what they deep down wanted… now - I just wonder what does De Troy do next!!!

4/7/24, 8:41 PM
@Anonymous I'm so grateful for this comment for it allows me to explain. I got a little behind through the holiday and missed my "deadline" this week -- I did pretty good, readers got 11 weeks in a row -- but still... As you'll see in the "Epilogue" most of the storylines lack complete resolution -- I'll explain why in the "author's note" at the end -- but suffice to say I didn't know what to do with the Budd Brothers when I came into this story, but I sure as hell know what I'm doing with them next!
4/2/24, 2:40 AM
I'm just wondering when this 'punishment' will end. What is John's ultimate goal? He could have embarrassed and ruined Chris' and Eric's live quite easily. What is he hoping will happen? Just curious. John does not miss a beat in the humiliation.

4/3/24, 3:31 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) It hasn't even been a full 24 hours since John started punishing Chris and not even 6 full hours with Eric. We'll see how far it goes, maybe once the Thompsons realize how screwed they are or how much they screwed others over. To be honest, when the punishment ends so will this story. So if you don't like the punishment then I guess don't read it? Honestly not sure what to make of this comment.

4/3/24, 7:03 PM
@[Cargo Cub](/user/show/10027653) I'm not offended by the story or the punishments. I'm just curious as to what is going on in John's mind. It gets me thinking about the bigger question of "how do we know when enough punishment has happened?" So again the story is fine it just raises the question I mentioned. It's very intriguing, how the human mind decides things. Perhaps I'm overthinking.

4/6/24, 9:57 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) In johns mind he wants to turn their very loves into a prison that will make them act against the homophobia. When he first started with Chris he didn't realize to what extent the two sons had contributed to the actions that he had been told about. It also became clear that the incident with the gym wasn't the first and certainly wouldn't be the last without John stepping in. Right now John is setting the building blocks for that prison and seeing how the Thompson's react and what effects them the most. He could just completely rewrite their personalities but that's not really reforming then. So in johns mind, and my own, he will continue to mess with them until he breaks them or he's sure that they won't break. He's also buying time until the oldest son is back and he can incorporate him in the punishments.

4/7/24, 6:12 PM
@[Cargo Cub](/user/show/10027653) Thanks for the insight!
4/7/24, 5:53 PM
Can't wait to see how this is gonna progress, especially the dynamic between Josh, Daniel and Matt. Obviously Josh has some serious repressed love for Daniel and Matt could make that bubble to the surface... But how is Matt going to deal with having two Hunters bound to him? Would Josh still resent Matt out of jealousy?