Recent Comments

4/7/24, 9:26 AM
Loving this setup - well-written with lots of potential and has me on the hook for chapter 2!
Malemann54
4/7/24, 6:52 AM
First read this story years ago and it was one of my favorites, happy to rediscover it.
4/7/24, 6:11 AM
This series is has the potential to become one of the site's all time classic!
4/6/24, 8:24 PM
I love it! Hot me rock hard. Just would have liked to get more about his struggle from first person and how he relaxes into his new drone existence...

4/6/24, 10:22 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Thanks bud! I thought about going into more detail at the end but it kinda would have broken the forced perspective, and I do so love to leave some things up to people’s imagination. 😈

4/7/24, 6:08 AM
@Wakeup I get that, but without wanting to sound too criticizing ... sometimes a break of form is required to most out of it. And the amazing thing about fantasy is that reading another person's take on it can be extremely stimulating. But don't take me wrong, I love your little story for what it is!
Nov 3, 2019
eagerboy415
4/7/24, 5:37 AM
The full game is awesome!
4/6/24, 10:22 PM
Fantastic story. Excellent pacing; surprinsingly sympathetic characters, creative, cute, even romantic. I really want to see more of big bro Kaden and him getting into a dynamic with the rest of the lovers!

4/7/24, 4:11 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks! I didn’t originally plan for Kaden to have a big role in this story but glad to see his short time left some impact. I was planning on writing some sort of side-story between Andrew and Kaden so he’ll get his time to shine eventually. If people are that interested in him I might extend this story a little longer than planned… for fun!!

4/7/24, 4:14 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Also yeah, there are aspects of romance included here and there. Sex is not only lust but can also include love. Hypnosis doesn’t always have to be unwilling
4/6/24, 11:21 AM
More please!! Love the story line. Perhaps you could even add Andrew into some leather as he continues to dominate Cam.

4/7/24, 4:07 AM
@[Bootman](/user/show/10017274) Thank you thank you! I’m still continuing and planning to include leather in some way (not full on clothes though unfortunately). As for Andrew, he’ll still dominate Cam but maybe not in the way some are expecting… maybe
4/7/24, 3:42 AM
This was so good. When’s the next chapter coming?!?!
pup666cerberus
4/7/24, 2:51 AM
So freaking hot!!! I’m saddened to see the last update was a few months ago, but I REALLY hope to see more of this!!