Recent Comments

Muscle-Flex
4/5/24, 12:08 AM
This is so well-written! All the detail is excellent. Some authors rush stories, but you are really taking the time to explore and let us enjoy the process of what John is doing to the Thompsons. The scenarios, the inner thoughts and descriptions... whew! It all makes for a very hot read!

4/6/24, 10:04 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) So to me, you could write a sex scene in a paragraph or two. But what makes it interesting and fun to read is the thoughts and feelings behind it. Or the empty brained pleasure that sex can induce. Thank you for the kind words! I try to vary my words and give detail when it's needed and speed up and gloss over what isn't important. The initial push into an ass gets a lot of description but the following fifty thrusts don't need their own paragraphs. Lol
Anonymous
4/3/24, 10:58 PM
Loving the direction of this story!! Is there any chance of body or mental transformation that could come up soon?

4/6/24, 10:01 PM
@Anonymous There's been some slight body modification with making areas more sensitive and the removal of gag reflex. I'm not sure how extreme I would go with it, same with mental transformation. Making them get turned on by certain things or having mental reactions is one thing, but John wants any changes in their personalities needs to happen naturally and because it breaks them. I do have some ideas for temporary transformations but they would all revert to what they were before hand.
4/6/24, 9:53 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhh shit! 😯😃
Muscle-Flex
4/6/24, 9:43 PM
Cleverly wrapped up! You tell a good tale!
4/6/24, 9:26 PM
Great premise -- great setup! Excited to see where this goes.
Apr 6, 2024
4/6/24, 7:14 PM
I loved the slow mental and physical transformations! But sometimes you seem to confuse two very different types of underwear: jockstraps and jockey briefs.

4/6/24, 7:30 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thanks glad you enoyed it! Where I'm from a jockey is a jockstrap. Briefs are merely briefs. The use of the word jockey was a play on words, as in a man who rides horses.

4/6/24, 7:47 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Here's an example of what I mean: "Colt handed out new jockstraps for everyone to wear; these ones had an opening at the front which allowed their large cocks to hang free at all times and show off their proud masculinity for the other guys. Each had an image of a horse’s head in a horseshoe on the right buttock, much like an owner’s brand." Hot imagery, but it doesn't make much sense that a jockstrap (which leaves the buttocks bare) would have an image on the right buttock.

4/6/24, 7:59 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Well these are clearly custom made with the opening on the front instead! I wasn't aiming for ultra accuracy in underwear descriptions . Hopefully such a small detail didn't detract from your enjoyment too much :grinning:
Apr 6, 2024
4/6/24, 6:25 PM
Loved this. Great horse tf, which is something I appreciate.

4/6/24, 7:31 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thanks I'm glad you liked it :)
Apr 6, 2024
4/6/24, 5:07 PM
Continue

4/6/24, 5:55 PM
@[Shotaboy](/user/show/10038942) Haha this one was just a standalone I'm afraid! But you might enjoy my other series and I do accept commissioned stories too :)
Apr 6, 2024
4/6/24, 5:04 PM
that was so fun, and the images really help with the visual images
Anonymous
4/6/24, 9:11 AM
I've been anticipating this for a long time! It was worth the wait! Bravo!

4/6/24, 2:52 PM
@Anonymous thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it