Recent Comments

4/4/24, 12:42 PM
Can't wait for more!
4/3/24, 9:05 PM
You did not disappoint! This was pretty damn hot and the way you handled the corruption was excellent! The corruption mid sex worked out pretty well.

Pcm
4/4/24, 9:41 AM
@[thecalimack](/user/show/1295157) Thank you so much!
Mar 31, 2024
4/4/24, 9:35 AM
Len Shapiro? lmao.
4/3/24, 7:48 PM
Wow. Just amazing. These demons seems to be so fucking hot and beautiful. I was reading the 13 chapters in just one session. But now I want to be one of these demons. I just have a question : where can I find a gold ring like this ? I want this happen to me !!!

4/4/24, 5:59 AM
@[GsxrPunk](/user/show/10048986) I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I wish I could tell you where to find one of those gold rings. I wouldn't mind getting one myself. :smiley:
4/4/24, 5:28 AM
Oh this is getting sexier and sexier! 😏
4/3/24, 9:53 PM
Your superhero fanfiction is always top-notch. After seeing you violate every male hero in the DC universe... it's so nice to see you can do it with the Marvel guys too. I hope some X-Men showe up later in this series. And I wouldn't mind some batboy actyion *wink**wink*

4/4/24, 4:24 AM
@[half-wit](/user/show/10017615) There are some smoking hot X-Men to use :)
4/3/24, 5:12 PM
Although I'm not that well-versed in the background of Captain America, the way that you scripted this deeply intense breaking of the hero (& his mind) was sheer magnificence!!:fireworks: I truly admire your writing prowess, especially your stories involving the breaking & subjugation of superheroes--those are _ALWAYS_ my favorite! BRAVO, SIR!!!:firecracker:

4/4/24, 4:24 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Thanks man, glad you liked it!
Ab3
4/2/24, 3:31 AM
This is an damn good series... Where r the next parts

4/4/24, 2:29 AM
@[Ab3](/user/show/10036556) Thank you for liking my series. I do not know when I'm going to make the next part. but if there are any suggestions and you want for a story I'm all ears.
Zander
4/4/24, 1:25 AM
I am very glad for the continuation of this story.An excellent chapter, an excellent and interesting plot (extraordinary and refreshing) on this topic, excellent writing and a long chapter. To put it in one word, this story is not a cliche. I hope in the future there will be more authors like you and with similar stories on this site. I am looking forward to the release of new chapters).
3/28/24, 12:04 AM
A bit dark. Still, like you said in an earlier comment, that was the ultimate direction the story was taking. Otherwise, the story was very creative. In a way, it reminded me of Dante's Inferno, with each punishment Ron and Chris endure reminiscent of the various circles of Hell. I thought the scene where Ron and Chris function as the Club's plumbing was both inventive and a little erotic. My only critique is the writing: You oscillate between past and present tenses. I suggest choosing one tense and sticking to it. Otherwise, I enjoyed reading this series. I look forward to reading your other work. :slightly_smiling_face:

4/1/24, 9:43 PM
@[Foot Thrall](/user/show/10048892) Thanks for your comment! I thought I had stuck consistently with the past tense throughout...some of it must have slipped along the way. Thanks for catching it, I'll keep an even closer eye on it in future proofreads. :wink:

4/4/24, 12:33 AM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902) You're welcome!