Recent Comments

Ab3
4/2/24, 3:31 AM
This is an damn good series... Where r the next parts

4/4/24, 2:29 AM
@[Ab3](/user/show/10036556) Thank you for liking my series. I do not know when I'm going to make the next part. but if there are any suggestions and you want for a story I'm all ears.
Zander
4/4/24, 1:25 AM
I am very glad for the continuation of this story.An excellent chapter, an excellent and interesting plot (extraordinary and refreshing) on this topic, excellent writing and a long chapter. To put it in one word, this story is not a cliche. I hope in the future there will be more authors like you and with similar stories on this site. I am looking forward to the release of new chapters).
3/28/24, 12:04 AM
A bit dark. Still, like you said in an earlier comment, that was the ultimate direction the story was taking. Otherwise, the story was very creative. In a way, it reminded me of Dante's Inferno, with each punishment Ron and Chris endure reminiscent of the various circles of Hell. I thought the scene where Ron and Chris function as the Club's plumbing was both inventive and a little erotic. My only critique is the writing: You oscillate between past and present tenses. I suggest choosing one tense and sticking to it. Otherwise, I enjoyed reading this series. I look forward to reading your other work. :slightly_smiling_face:

4/1/24, 9:43 PM
@[Foot Thrall](/user/show/10048892) Thanks for your comment! I thought I had stuck consistently with the past tense throughout...some of it must have slipped along the way. Thanks for catching it, I'll keep an even closer eye on it in future proofreads. :wink:

4/4/24, 12:33 AM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902) You're welcome!
Sss
4/3/24, 11:24 PM
I hope Brad can find himself.
4/3/24, 10:17 PM
I forgot to vote I vote for the lights flickering to be a coincidence
4/3/24, 10:04 PM
I like it although I do have to say I think the trouble students would be better for preppification. That and you say it's near the end of the school year at one point and then a paragraph later you say that prom isn't for month and your still trying to plan it. A better idea, which I might right about if you don't mind if I work off this idea, would be a senior class picture and have the photo photoshopped to turn delinquent student into model preppy boys. Also glad to see your writing again.

4/3/24, 10:11 PM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) Yeah, I'll admit sometimes I'm not entirely clear on the timeline in my stories, there is meant to be a time jump to the prom itself after the photographer is hired. Feel free to do that photoshop idea you mentioned, I intended this to be a one-off story from me anyway. And thanks. Always glad to write about preppy boys.
4/3/24, 9:59 PM
This was interesting. I hope his action figure collection still get action after they are put in their tubes.
Rubberspiraldronthiago
4/3/24, 9:09 PM
Yes !¡¡ i love i love....i am Chad...yes yes !!i am...
4/3/24, 8:39 PM
wow so hot with the two captains.
4/3/24, 8:26 PM
I'm really hoping that Remy will end up subject to his own "virus".