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6/9/25, 3:27 PM
wow this was great, please keep going, love the twins and brad part so much. love to see more bulls added
6/9/25, 3:08 PM
Great story thus far...waiting to see how things evolve ;)
6/9/25, 2:31 PM
Very very cool. Very very hot and sexy. Love this story and the set up. LOVED the alternating POV, very nifty to get into the heads of BOTH dudes. I also like the controller, so him winning was great! (I imagine myself in the role of the controller). Also I love the rimming, ESPECIALLY dominant controller rimming subby subject. Yes! (Nice addition there, very sexy). This was a great story. Love the set up and the nature of the characters and how you describe the Mirror - cool link to the Librarians and stuff too. Fun story. Very enjoyable.
6/9/25, 2:24 PM
It's a perfect revenge story and i can understand Mark completely. But i like the happy end too and so, it's an exciting story from the beginning till the end
6/9/25, 1:17 PM
Just read this again, and it has only improved on the second reading. Loved the world you created and the characters you made here!
6/9/25, 12:45 PM
The gentle persuasion of Billy's learned approach wiht Brock - it was just so well done! WOW! THANKYOU for your terrific writing. I found myself inhaling deeply like I got to enjoy the man-smells. Well done!
6/9/25, 12:14 PM
This story is hard-hitting! I didnt think that the "inventions" would trigger me... but lines like this one are so good..."No matter who makes Pete’s wonderfully thick dick or John’s long white cock nice and hard won't bother you because a fucking rock-hard, huge erection merely means they’re happy, right?” The writing is just next-level naughty and provocative. Visiting Yosuf's home made my skin crawl. You write so visually. I am reading and somehow INSIDE the story.
6/9/25, 11:28 AM
very hot! thanks for another great story Cracker

6/9/25, 11:48 AM
@[Fred Ward](/user/show/10050452) Hey. Glad. You enjoyed it, D.😉
6/9/25, 8:20 AM
love the story, hope you continue

6/9/25, 11:47 AM
@[eastbay](/user/show/1576204) Thank you