Recent Comments

6/10/25, 5:16 AM
It's wonderful to have two people develop a strong connection like this. i would love to find my David!
12/22/24, 6:15 AM
I love it ! Can't wait for the next chapter Romance mixed with mind control is so hot !

6/10/25, 5:03 AM
@[FrenchPreppyMaster](/user/show/10032335) i agree -- i love D/s romance! For me it's the mind control first, and not necessarily romance as having a strong positive connection in which both (all?) parties benefit in some way.
6/4/25, 9:02 PM
Love it! Is there a link to your Patreon?

6/4/25, 9:09 PM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) Thank you! Really glad you like it. And no, there is not a link yet 'cause it's not yet live. 18+ content requires extra verification stuff and I want to make sure I can really commit to putting stuff out regularly before taking peoples' money.

6/10/25, 2:13 AM
@[astrolub](/user/show/471552) Okily dokily, I went live. There's little up there, but I'll be working on getting some older and newer stuff up there over the coming weeks. I can't commit to a chapter a day like some people, my private goal right now is to do at least 1 new post a week. 🤞

6/10/25, 2:13 AM
@[astrolub](/user/show/471552) Right ... I have a headache, that's my excuse for not putting in a link! https://www.patreon.com/c/ShaneWrites

6/10/25, 4:28 AM
@[astrolub](/user/show/471552) No worries at all, no expectations, I just like your work :)
6/10/25, 3:55 AM
What a great original idea to modify a tanning bed in this way. i love to anticipate the seduction and feel the power exchange. I also like to understand how control is implemented. All these things are what makes this story so hot for me. However, i also prefer longer plots which evolve in such a way that even the slave lives some form of happy life -- even when his new life that was coerced or borderline non-consensual. Unfortunately for my taste Kiel didn't just get tanned; he got burned.
6/10/25, 2:46 AM
Amazing and hot
6/10/25, 2:12 AM
This is wonderfully written - the clear distinction between the different monsters and their psychologies is really effective.
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6/10/25, 12:03 AM
The first time I drank piss, I was sure I wouldn't like it. Seemed so disgusting. But I found it wasn't that bad. And did did a number on my head. I felt so submissive as I did it and afterwards. I have now grown to love to drink a man's piss, in some ways even more than his cum.
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6/9/25, 11:28 PM
More more!
6/9/25, 11:07 PM
Oh yes, that pushed a lot of buttons for me! I anticipate re-reading this often, even multiple times a day. Very nuanced and natural writing. Realistic characters placed in a plausible world. I hope you’ll consider continuing. Thank you for your work

6/9/25, 11:26 PM
@[Jayb3369](/user/show/38058) You’re most welcome, and thanks for letting me push your buttons. I do this for the enjoyment of turning like-minded people on. Your comment is much-appreciated fuel for the fire.