Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/3/24, 5:21 PM
Incredibly hot chapter of an incredibly hot series. I would love to see how Duncan will interact with other members of the lacrosse team and the wrestling team. And I hope you’ll delve a bit more into the overall plan for the teams and the backstory of Mandrake managed to get to the lacrosse team in the first place. In any case, I can’t wait to read more!
4/3/24, 5:03 PM
I love this kind of control. Like a slower change, But so good and looking for more Parts.
4/3/24, 4:05 PM
Oh. So I was hoping he would be the top of his now two boys. Oh well. Interesting setup though.
Mar 11, 2024
Anonymous
4/2/24, 5:05 AM
Soooo so hot! I love the blend of humiliation and wholesomeness. Also love the lack of a long preamble before we got to the good stuff

4/3/24, 3:51 PM
@Anonymous Glad you liked it! Sometimes the preamble is necessary, but it felt like we could skip it here. I like to just dive in whenever possible.
4/2/24, 9:38 AM
Chapter 50 hopefully! Happy to see this story back.

4/3/24, 3:39 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) We'll see how long it goes! I certainly have plans that could carry it pretty far. Unfortunately real life has been a lot lately so this has had to take a back seat. But I'm well on the way with the next chapter so it should be out next week at the latest.
hairyartist
4/3/24, 12:54 PM
Awesome story Jack, Thank You~~!!

4/3/24, 1:31 PM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) More than welcome
Hinner
4/3/24, 5:00 AM
Is it bad that I kinda want Oliver to win? Would love for him to give Remy a good ol' taste of his own medicine
4/3/24, 4:41 AM
This was a very fun story to read. There is definitely not enough content of breaking captain america and this was a very nice read!
4/3/24, 4:31 AM
My complaint lies in the lack of resistance, especially with the whole soldier following orders without question or without thinking. That's not how any soldier or army operates. And there should be resistance to that idea when it came up in every soldier. In other words, it should not be as simple as you depict it.
4/3/24, 3:14 AM
I like how this is a community story but nobody is adding to it.