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hypnosub
4/2/24, 2:55 PM
Just finished this story and I absolutely loved it! Definitely one I’ll keep coming back to in the future!
BangBang
4/2/24, 2:15 PM
Jizztastic man.
Anonymous
4/2/24, 1:57 PM
I’d also love if he already made changes. I really want to see him slowly lose all his newfound iq again, nothing is hotter than losing perception and understanding of the situation until it’s too late.
4/2/24, 9:42 AM
Always happy to read another cockatrice story. The creativity is always off the charts!
4/2/24, 9:25 AM
Soooo fucking hot hope we see Scorch empty those big fucking balls soon
4/2/24, 9:02 AM
This was a really fascinating premise. The nature of identity and how malleable it is in tf is something that really intrigues me. So the fact that Clayton came to genuinely see himself as a fleshjack and change his name to Jack was fascinating to see. I've never seen that kind of identity shift while the person is at least somewhat animate/human so that was fascinating, honestly I really liked that the human and fleshjack nature were merged without any contradiction between the two. Your ideas are always so creative! And it's clear that you really enjoy coming up with worlds to set your stories in, that's really cool to see as well. I will admit that I didn't find Damon particularly sympathetic in this chapter. Obviously he didn't mean for the transformation to be permanent and he's dealing with a lot of guilt but I felt that he had some nerve pulling the 'you don't know what it's like to be me, I wish I was in your place' routine with the person who's been permanently transformed thanks to his mistake. Honestly I felt pretty much all warlocks were condescending/not particularly sympathetic towards Clayton in both chapters so I just wasn't very sympathetic to the 'warlocks have problems too you know' angle. Still, all's well that ends well.
Zander
4/2/24, 6:25 AM
Gregory was gone for 6 years. Does that mean he spent 600 years in Hell? because time flows differently there and one year is equal to 100 years? If this is so, does this explain how he fell with a strong spirit, broke and became a Demon?

Pcm
4/2/24, 8:07 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Well, I prefer not to mess with the temporal physics, so Gregory's statement can be understood both literally or as a hyperbole. Either way, the end result is the same: the knight has now become a demon, and he is eager to see more join him!
4/2/24, 4:22 AM
I don’t normally read series but this one has me hooked.
4/2/24, 4:19 AM
I hope they both get to become each other’s toy and master. That would be such a hot dynamic.
4/2/24, 3:07 AM
I vote the first option, love seeing more of your content!