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Ab3
3/31/24, 10:58 AM
It's damn hot story... Please continue where william and his Father spread this pleasure to whole world... Peoples resisting in start and falling for it and asking for more

Pcm
4/1/24, 4:42 PM
@[Ab3](/user/show/10036556) I'm really glad that you like the story! And of course, our horny demons will not rest until every man in the King become as depraved and horny manly demons like they are. Currently, I'm planning four more stories for this series based around kinky fantasy scenarios; being taking place during a feast, a tournament, a war, and one big finale. I hope that you will find the rest of the story as enjoyable.
3/30/24, 10:27 AM
Hey dude, this is a nice story, but the amount of basic spelling and grammar mistakes that popped up on the first page.. kinda showed that while you might be passionate about this, there's a lack of attention to detail. That makes the story feel like a rushed out the door, never looked at again draft rather than a sexy work of erotic fiction. And when authors don't do basic checks, it lessens the impact of the writing, takes away the passion and main point of the writing. None of this is meant to be discouraging: run this through a spell checker just once and there's a bunch of small, easily corrected mistakes. Incredibly useful tools are available to all authors, especially if English is not the authors native language. > masterbaiting while smelling his underwear masturbating > feeling ashaed ashamed > stoping his feet on the ground in anger. stomping > Moreover, if that wasn’t enough embarrassing, embarrassing enough > Not only you like to smell Not only do you

Hey
4/1/24, 3:37 PM
Thank you, I have revised a lot of the mistakes, and i have made some minor changes for better experience. They will be available within 48 hrs after my edit is allowed to proceed. Please read once more and share any other ideas i can use for my future work. @[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878)
Hey
4/1/24, 3:36 PM
Hello, Author here.Thank you for reading this and please excuse some of my mistake as I’m still new to writing and English isn’t my first language. (I have revised a lot of them, if you find anymore please leave a comment) Im hoping to continue this with 2 or more stories (one about divulging into the past when they first met). Please suggest some kinks/fetishes that you would like them to do. That’s it, peace out
4/1/24, 12:58 AM
When they arrived at the entrance of town, Clay was safe from the zombies. Was he separated from the group and that's how he became infected? The story jumped quickly to him being attacked.

4/1/24, 2:54 AM
@[muscle growth man](/user/show/10040653) Oh yeah I fear that I rushed the story in that part a lot, the way I imagined it’s that he got left behind because he was way more tired and he wasn’t as athletic. Definitely should’ve mentioned it there

4/1/24, 2:49 PM
@[ArielZagreus](/user/show/10040716) That makes sense that Clay wasn't as athletic and fell victim to the muscle zombies. Thanks for the clarification. Anxious to know what happens to the other guys in future chapters.
Cb2
4/1/24, 2:36 PM
This is terrific, the creeping dread about whats going to happen is amazing.
4/1/24, 2:14 PM
Very nice
4/1/24, 1:45 PM
Your stories are always mixed with sadness and lust.
4/1/24, 1:20 PM
Sad to see such a good storie being dropped
Anonymous
4/1/24, 1:01 PM
I’ll never feel safe in a foam bath again. Or will I?
Anonymous
4/1/24, 6:48 AM
Intense. I'm curious to see what happens next.

4/1/24, 12:15 PM
@Anonymous thank you