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Anonymous
3/29/24, 10:52 AM
I guess the author has given up and abandoned this story. It's a shame, really.
3/29/24, 8:37 AM
One question: Why do you add the tag #German? I understand that this story takes place in Germany, but the tag is meant to indicate that the story is *written* in German. I assume that some people don't even click it just because they can't read German...

Arcturus
3/29/24, 8:43 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) You're right. My fault. As we startet to write, i Set all Tags and hadn't in mind,that er publish here the translation Thanks for the hint, Arcturus

3/29/24, 10:09 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Sorry fpr the mistake. We will improve this asap.
3/29/24, 8:32 AM
Eine sehr geile Geschichte - der Gedanke, selber von diesem großen geilen Kerl zu seiner Hypnosau gemacht zu werden, lässt mich direkt abspritzen!
ClamJeff46
3/28/24, 5:07 AM
idk if i'm comfortable with there being mention of a minor being sexually assaulted in a porn story. Especially when the main character who is barely of legal age is essentially explaining how's he's been groomed. Super uncomfortable.

3/28/24, 8:56 PM
@ClamJeff46 Hey, speaking as an approver here who noticed this comment--thanks for raising a concern over something that made you uncomfortable. Our approvers work very hard to make sure that every story we approve adheres to the [rules](https://forum.gaykinkystories.com/t/rules-for-stories-posted-on-gayspiralstories/1214), but we always want to hear if there's something that we may have missed. I've taken the moment to review this story and made the decision that it fits the rules we've established. If you have concerns in the future, please feel free to reach out to me by DM.

ClamJeff46
3/29/24, 6:03 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) ????????????? the second rule is literally "No sex or manipulation/hypnosis of children or pre-pubescent teens." and the 18 year old in this story literally says > “How long had he been fucking you? When did he start?” > > “We were in middle school, summer before our last year there. He fucked me all that summer, all the last year of middle school, then that summer, and all through high school.” how is that not a depiction of a minor being manipulated into sex???? Not only that but the adult character then asks this barely legal kid to then describe the sex he had while he was in middle school. Nothing in the story indicates this isn't supposed to be seen as sexual and there is no #teen tag on this story. This is honestly inexcusable.

3/29/24, 7:26 AM
@ClamJeff46 I want to clarify that the character in question is explaining how he’s previously had frequent, consensual sex with his high school fuckbuddy, who is the same age as him. This is not remotely “a minor being manipulated into sex”. You also keep describing the character as a “barely legal kid”. Yes, he is eighteen. He is an adult. I understand this story isn’t for you. But this conversation doesn’t feel like it can be productive if we keep having it in the comments section. Neemie or I would be happy to chat about this more in DMs, and maybe there is a tag that could be used to help you avoid stories like this in the future (‘teen’ is not the appropriate tag in this case, but maybe ‘older dom younger sub’ could be?). I just don’t feel that an author’s comments section is the right place for this conversation.
11/16/20, 8:41 PM
> They were all dressed in comfortable travel-wear, but the brunette was wearing a fleece onesie that had animal ears on the hood – he looked like that kid from the “Wild Things” book except grown up and muscular. He looked maybe like a wrestler. That was *way* too specific. Is there an image that inspired this, and if so, can I please have it? > “Stop!” Snake yelled. “Arrêtez!” If my French is right, and it usually isn't, you used the formal 'you' conjugation here, while Rugby Boy addresses Snake with the informal. I suspect it's just that you used Google Translate for this, but did you make Snake bad at his conjugations on purpose? (Or does someone who speaks better French want to fill me in?) > I confess a certain weakness for French-Canadian men, that dark-haired, creamy skin thing just kills me. I find them sexy as all get-out. I went to college in Quebec. This is basically why.

3/29/24, 3:17 AM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Rereading this story and came across your post. The image of the onsie reminds me of [Rick and Griff](https://www.twokingsunlimited.com/product/preorder-only-two-kings-unlimited-thk-brand-dark-grey-hooded-onesie/).

3/29/24, 5:22 AM
Thanks for the share @[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223). Hot AF.
3/29/24, 4:30 AM
❤️❤️🖤🖤❤️❤️
PupBama
3/29/24, 4:24 AM
Keep going! While a familiar trope, these series are always great!!
3/29/24, 3:10 AM
Hey Man. I read the story with interest. Got me hard. That's always a good thing. Maybe you'd like these stories I wrote about kind of similar transformations. - "Missionary Boy" (https://www.gaycollarstories.com/story/show/10001267 & sequal https://www.gaycollarstories.com/story/show/10001295) plus "Mandrasat II: priest slave" (https://www.gaycollarstories.com/series/show/10002678). If you read them, I hope you feel a response at times in the nether region - like I did reading yours.
3/29/24, 1:36 AM
I can only say Wow!
3/29/24, 1:14 AM
I really enjoy tickling stories, and I think Kyle was my favorite character. I don't know why, but I have a thing for tall, dark, and pale guys. My only critique is that Captain Laughing Gas could've spoken in a little more formal tone. For example, instead of saying, "You are way too uptight," you could've have him say, "You are much too uptight." But otherwise, it was very well written, and very erotic. I really enjoy your stories. Keep up the good work! :grin: