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3/29/24, 5:38 PM
I LOVE your writing style. THANK YOU
Anonymous
3/29/24, 5:38 PM
Addmore parts of this story sir
3/28/24, 1:43 AM
I think it would of been hot if Cam was reluctant or did not want his bf to be taken over. Still excited to see where it goes

3/29/24, 4:09 PM
@[Hypnoguy12](/user/show/907890) Thank you for the read! It would be interesting to show that Cam was still uneasy with Al being controlled but they’ve already come to terms with having Andrew. In hindsight, some more resistance would’ve been good. Might rewrite some sections some day
3/29/24, 3:54 PM
This is great will it continue i really want to see what happens to them
Anonymous
3/27/24, 10:20 PM
Man, that training dildo really fucked Brad in more ways than one, huh This is such a great series and I eagerly await each chapter. You have the perfect blend of hot scenes and great plot! Really want to see where this ends. Do you know or will the characters surprise even you, Naedre?

3/28/24, 12:03 AM
@Anonymous The endings are written and being edited. There is a sweet ending and a dark ending I planned from the beginning. The characters did surprise me a bit, especially in the dark ending. It’s still dark, but I expected someone to end up being evil when they were just human. Only human, yet all the dark stuff happened anyway. I don’t know if that makes it more or less dark.

3/29/24, 3:25 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I'm personally more excited for the bad ending lol. Thanks for another great chapter!
3/29/24, 2:47 PM
Great story u can go anywhere with it, turn them in sex objects
3/29/24, 5:39 AM
Thank you! Very glad you didn’t tease out the Senator too much 😮‍💨

3/29/24, 12:00 PM
@[Big Fan](/user/show/10000420) I know, right? As I've mentioned before, if this were a novel... Seriously, I intended to tease it out a little, of course, but then I realized I was done with plot points -- I've pretty much played out all the events I planned to happen at the Ranch and I had nothing left for the remaining characters to do while I strung it out. So here we are, at the climax...
Anonymous
3/29/24, 10:52 AM
I guess the author has given up and abandoned this story. It's a shame, really.
3/29/24, 8:37 AM
One question: Why do you add the tag #German? I understand that this story takes place in Germany, but the tag is meant to indicate that the story is *written* in German. I assume that some people don't even click it just because they can't read German...

Arcturus
3/29/24, 8:43 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) You're right. My fault. As we startet to write, i Set all Tags and hadn't in mind,that er publish here the translation Thanks for the hint, Arcturus

3/29/24, 10:09 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Sorry fpr the mistake. We will improve this asap.
3/29/24, 8:32 AM
Eine sehr geile Geschichte - der Gedanke, selber von diesem großen geilen Kerl zu seiner Hypnosau gemacht zu werden, lässt mich direkt abspritzen!