Recent Comments

3/30/24, 9:16 PM
This story is simply amazing. I'm almost sorry it took me so long to discover it... now for the next chapter (my dick leaking...)
3/30/24, 7:22 PM
Matt you better come back to your boys especially to Jared. I like it that he is more knowledgeable about his powers that he could temporarily control Mark. I cant wait to read the next one. Hope theres no other Hunters coming. (Maybe he could control and add Josh instead so theres no death involvement. But i just hope theres nothing bad will happen to Matt and Daniel.)
3/25/24, 6:44 PM
Thank you all so much for the support!! I canโ€™t tell you how happy this makes me. The number of giggles I got when people said they could tell who this was ๐Ÿ˜‚ Now I just gotta surprise you all with a completely different style for the next challenge! Working on the next chapter (His Son, Yusuf) and a commission for a dear friend. Hopefully have it out by the weekend!

Anonymous
3/25/24, 7:31 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Congratulations for winning. But its very sad we'll never know how it ends.

3/25/24, 7:32 PM
@Anonymous Ooooo read to filth ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Anonymous
3/25/24, 8:11 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Sorry, I didn't meant to be mean. Is just, no offense, but you never finish your long stories. I' like your work, but I've started to avoid your series because I don't want to keep getting frustrated with unfinished plots, it's like having coitus interruptus. Re-Educator, Sinfulfillment and all the other good stories are as dead as Uncle Ben and I no longer have any hope that we will ever see an ending for any of those. Althought to be fair, the chances of you finishing a story are higher as long as you stay away from chapter 7, I've noticed that's the death row to your stories. Beyond chaper 7, is EdIam's writing gas chamber. Again, no offense, I get many writers just don't handle long formats.

3/25/24, 8:29 PM
@Anonymous Zero offense at all! I get you completely. I sincerely to mean to finish all those stories you've listed (no lie). It's mostly about a combination of a few things currently: 1) real life is busy AF (I'm a nurse and gaymer, two things that take a lot of my attention). 2) I'm working on a commissioned story as well and want to make sure that the person paying me get's his money's worth. and 3) when I get a fresh, new idea, I want to get it pen to paper quickly. With this one, the contest was the perfect time to unleash a story I've wanted to write for a long time. For those that haven't noticed, this is a directly inspired by Wesley Brecken's sixth chapter of [Slob Control](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/10002471). The theme fitting my thoughts on expanding that genius story was just too good to resist. I have a couple friends with access to my One Drive...they can attest I've got the next few chapters of Sinfulfillment started (I def want to get that out because I'm proud of the ending) and I'm already more than halfway done with the next chapter of this story. I have no guarantees for Re-Educator/I Love Him, But... or Retirement, but still would love to get back on in and finish all those. In the end, I appreciate all of you and am keenly aware of my partially completed stories. I'm just happy that people still read my shit knowing my history. But, well, in the end, I post here because I enjoy writing as a hobby. There's not the biggest obligation for me to write or complete anything without, like, compensation haha. This isn't a job for me (other than my commission). But I do very much plan on finishing both Sinfulfillment and this story! TLDR: I'm bad at finishing stories but absolutely plan on doing what I can to finish this one.

Anonymous
3/30/24, 6:02 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Still this wknd?

3/30/24, 6:04 PM
@Anonymous Yup! Itโ€™s written. Just doing the proofread with the help of a friend!
3/30/24, 2:10 PM
Fantastic - I have cum to this chapter ("Daddy!") more times than I can count. There should be one more chapter where Warren surrenders his virgin ass.. Amazing!
3/30/24, 5:29 AM
Keep up this amazing story premis. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes
3/30/24, 5:18 AM
Right to the point. Loved it!
3/30/24, 2:41 AM
Take a little longer. Your writing is good. People will appreciate longer chapters! Hot story!

3/30/24, 4:10 AM
@[Mrdick](/user/show/1001656) Thank you, I will take time to write longer chapters for you guys, and I will try to sync the other websites I post this on (except patreon who'll read it the minute I'm done writing) so online publishes might get delayed from time to time. I will try to make it fair for everybody tho and in the end all The Fates canon chapters will be out and public. Thanks again for the support <3
3/29/24, 4:54 PM
I tend to be a bit romantic so I like a happy or sweet ending. But that also depends on your definition of dark. Either way this story is my new favorite. Hope we have some chapters to go before the conclusion.

3/29/24, 10:41 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) 2 more chapters until the branching finale (so 4 more chapters to read: 6, 7, and 8a/8b). The real question is: Do I post 8a and 8b on the same day? Or space them out?

3/30/24, 3:33 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I think Iโ€™ve written and deleted my reply about four times already. I canโ€™t come up with an answer. Maybe if you planned two endings all along then both at once? Otherwise go with your original ending first? Gaaaa!
3/29/24, 7:17 AM
well written storyline. the description of darkness fighting what was to come. trying his best to break free. in the end the corrupting darkness won out.

3/29/24, 10:09 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Thank you for reading my story, I published the second chapter, now from Galakor's point of view, I hope you like it too.
3/29/24, 9:09 PM
This is funny and hot and so well written! Thank you for sharing this here <3