Recent Comments

3/27/24, 3:53 PM
Very good intro like to see where it goes, turn one into a mannequin with a hard cock
3/27/24, 8:10 AM
A very good start, I'm looking forward for more chapters.

3/27/24, 3:41 PM
@[Pup Vince](/user/show/10023016) The next chapter will deal with Kevin finding out what Kyle was doing when he slept the last 5 years…
3/27/24, 3:37 PM
That was a great story. Had a lot of fun reading it. Thanks.
3/27/24, 3:36 PM
That story is hot as fuck!
Hinner
3/27/24, 12:28 PM
Very clearly inspired by Campus Magnum, by Berylforge. Interested to see what happens next!

3/27/24, 3:01 PM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) I did get my inspiration from Campus Magnum by Berylforge, who knows, maybe if it'll be a hit we'll do something together haha.
3/27/24, 9:18 AM
Hot af so far, Definitely looking forward to any updates you do for the story! Not sure how long the story is, but can make a table of contentt for all the cards thats effecting the players, to help the readers keep things straight.

3/27/24, 3:00 PM
@[Speed99](/user/show/909251) I will make a table of content, right now I've got a few cards written down. I won't make an online list right now 'cause there isn't much, but I will make one when the time is right. Thank you for the feedback :)
3/27/24, 2:46 PM
Definitely want to see more!
3/27/24, 1:52 PM
Thanks to all readers, comments and ratings made so far. Taking a place in the challenge was an experiment for me in several aspects: First Time a challenge, first time a branched story with a single final. To create this little "universe" was so much fun for me! Kr, Vince
Apr 2, 2022
Anonymous
3/27/24, 1:44 PM
That's hot
3/27/24, 1:36 PM
Would love to read more . Seems hot!