Recent Comments

3/27/24, 12:27 PM
i love Mikey. I want to meet Mikey.
Anonymous
3/27/24, 10:57 AM
Oh this is going to be a good series!! Can’t wait for more.
3/27/24, 10:57 AM
I would love to see more, if you don't mind
3/27/24, 7:52 AM
Nice story. Reminds me very much of GoodTime’s writing style, along with the name changes.
3/27/24, 6:57 AM
Fun story. You've got a great ear for dialogue
3/27/24, 4:02 AM
Ooh this is a very interesting but also Hot story. I never thought a manuscript style story would be this so hot.

3/27/24, 4:08 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thanks! I liked the idea of seeing what I could do without any visuals.
3/27/24, 2:02 AM
Second part please
Dec 25, 2021
3/26/24, 10:44 PM
What a beautiful, and hot, Christmas story!
Art
3/26/24, 10:26 PM
This story held so much promise but was never finished. It is always disappointing for that to happen. I don't know why you don't have confidence because you're obviously a talented writer. Maybe you need a dominant to MAKE you complete what you started!
3/20/24, 8:37 PM
I love this! This story is absolutely asking for a continuation! Please tell us you're going to add more chapters after the challenge...

3/26/24, 9:14 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) I'm glad you like it :grin: the story was mostly an experiment, I wanted to play around with the theme of the challenge. It's quite different from the silly sneaker stuff I usually write about so I don't know if I'll end up adding more chapters.. maybe if I feel inspired sometime :grin: