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buho guy
3/25/24, 10:11 PM
This story is STUPIDLY hot. I hope you'll continue it but even if you don't, thank you so much for writing this! One of the best I've read on the site in a while😄
3/25/24, 9:47 PM
Its great
Mar 24, 2024
Muscle-Flex
3/25/24, 7:42 PM
Dropping us right into a mystery! This will be fun. I couldn't quite picture the full situation the narrator and Ben are in (lying on the floor, wrists and ankles bound?) Seductive start! I can't wait to see what game the captor has in store, who this amusingly fiendish dude is, and what his plans are for our three rugby studs. 🏉💪
2/3/24, 3:05 AM
I really loved this story. It feels like a story I have always wanted. It feels like a story I might have written. I normally don’t give 5 stars to anything but this story got all high marks.

2/4/24, 12:39 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thank you man!! I appreciate hearing that especially since it’s my first story I was a bit nervous!

Anonymous
2/4/24, 12:51 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) It’s spectacular.

3/25/24, 3:36 AM
@[Rarg](/user/show/710551) now it's all revealed. I hope you keep writing.

3/25/24, 5:59 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Haha yup the mask is gone! But I do plan on it for sure when the inspiration hits :) it was rather fun!
Ab3
3/25/24, 5:47 PM
Woww that is hot... Jerked on it but it finished abruptly.. need more n more details so that we can release easily.. lolzz
3/25/24, 4:41 PM
Congrats on winning!
3/21/24, 6:36 AM
So hot man! Love the detail and the gear swap! Would love to see him forced to worship his gear on him!

3/25/24, 3:18 PM
@[Leatherjaye](/user/show/1814961) Thank LJ! Glad you enjoyed it. We'll see where it goes from here.
3/24/24, 5:01 PM
This was beautifully conjured, you managed to make it bittersweet without making it tragic. However, it needed more 'meat' in the middle, you had a lot of short sentences. It does not mean the story is bad per se, it's really really good, but I feel this kind of story would have worked _even_ better as a longer novella.

3/25/24, 11:50 AM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Thank you and it's true yes. This story is honestly the one that I would want to revisit the most, if I ever did that. I think giving the characters more breathing room to fully develop their relationships would be a pretty good idea. Also setting up some of the payoffs better. :heart: