Recent Comments

3/24/24, 5:01 PM
This was beautifully conjured, you managed to make it bittersweet without making it tragic. However, it needed more 'meat' in the middle, you had a lot of short sentences. It does not mean the story is bad per se, it's really really good, but I feel this kind of story would have worked _even_ better as a longer novella.

3/25/24, 11:50 AM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Thank you and it's true yes. This story is honestly the one that I would want to revisit the most, if I ever did that. I think giving the characters more breathing room to fully develop their relationships would be a pretty good idea. Also setting up some of the payoffs better. :heart:
floetenspieler
3/25/24, 10:30 AM
It’s so exciting to watch him succumbing to his Master Gino
Anonym
3/25/24, 10:23 AM
Ok, so this was like one of the hottest stories on this site. I love how you write hypno scenes. And also, that ending is great. Perfect. I really like the direction you've taken it. This is definetly a story I'm gonna come back to time and time again
Jul 23, 2019
Glatzentraeger
3/25/24, 10:22 AM
Oh wow, I wish I could be Robin in this great story.
floetenspieler
3/25/24, 9:40 AM
Wonderful story, got me hard and horny
3/25/24, 9:21 AM
Very good, hope u keep up writing
Mar 24, 2024
3/25/24, 8:19 AM
I love the story, for someone who have an underwear fetish, this certainly hit the spot... MORE!!!
3/25/24, 5:36 AM
This story got way to few comments, but I'm really happy that you earned yourself a badge. This kind of story always has a tough time getting enough love, as many people are turned off by that kind of debauchery. It always strikes a chord in me, though, and I really appreciate your stories here! Please continue to write and publish them herre!
offeringservice26
3/25/24, 4:00 AM
Still one of the best of all time!