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3/24/24, 7:26 AM
I don't know exactly what it is you do, but it seems the way you weave details of the mind control techniques into the story makes it almost magical. i feel pretty familiar with standard kinds of hypnosis techniques but you invent other techniques which you really bring alive and make them completely believable. You are turning me from being a goodie-two-shoes to a bad-boy who wants the crime lords to enslave and use the hero in whatever way they want (especially, as Ab3 puts it, to turn this superhero into a bitch in heat!) Thanks so much for this hot entertainment.
3/24/24, 6:44 AM
I approved your 1st chapter now. Please adjust the first paragraph into 2 or more, to make it easier to read.
Anonymous
3/24/24, 6:30 AM
I really enjoy that they are being filmed. Very hot. Maybe have them use their phones to record things whenever they get a certain phone call to do something humiliating? Thanks again for the great series so far!
3/24/24, 4:13 AM
Loving this series!
3/24/24, 12:48 AM
Interesting and sexy start. I like the pov and the focus on the butt and hole. Locking the cock away is not really interesting to me but getting it so he focuses on his hole was great. Too bad there wasn't top pov rimming of the future good boy. But yeah fun start!

3/24/24, 3:36 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) It's only a precaution. Gotta make sure the boy focuses on other things by removing his vices one by one
CHT
3/24/24, 12:03 AM
Good start ... hope Julian stays aware of whats happening but cant control it for extra embarrassment

3/24/24, 3:35 AM
@[CHT](/user/show/10025789) Don't worry, Ivans is trying to be discreet about this right now until he gets Julian in his clutches 😈
Anonymous
3/23/24, 11:53 PM
Super Hot!!
3/23/24, 2:36 AM
The premise is interesting and has potential, but please avoid using anachronistic language the way. Your use is truly ungrammatical, inconsistent, and it's not even close to what knights of the period you describe would have spoken (the Anglo Saxon of the first Millennium was as different from modern English as German is far from it. It just makes the speech incoherent. I beg of you, stop using language like that.

3/23/24, 10:53 PM
@Callimachus While the grammar is not good, (you don't conjugate "old-fashioned" English verbs by just adding "-eth" to them) the question is whether it is the _author_ who doesn't know that, or the protagonist. "Will" has created the scenario in his imagination; there is no requirement for his vision to be either consistent or accurate. We will have to see what comes along in the next chapter. It also unsafe to talk about anachronism anywhere close to TH White's _Once and Future King_. White's text is consciously anachronistic. His source is Malory's _Morte d'Arthur_, which is a 15th Century retelling of French stories from an earlier, and complx, tradition. Knights in shining armour belong to the "Age of Chivalry" of the "High Middle Ages" - after 1000 (ie 2nd Millennium.) English knights after 1066 would have spoken Norman-French, rather than "Anglo-Saxon". And the stories of Arthur make him _British_, fighting Saxons. He would (if he actually existed) have spoken the language we now refer to as "Brythonic", the predecessor of Welsh, Cornish and Breton.
ChavvyCumCow
3/23/24, 6:33 PM
hot story bruv. like to be in suspended state of control and pleasure.

3/23/24, 10:41 PM
@ChavvyCumCow Thanks! I think a lot of men wouldn't mind being clients here 😅
3/23/24, 8:53 AM
Please make use of Spell Check......

3/23/24, 10:41 PM
@[Kim_Jaewon](/user/show/1327650) My bad, I'm bad about that sometimes haha. I did comb through and make some edits. Hope you enjoyed!