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3/24/24, 4:13 AM
Loving this series!
3/24/24, 12:48 AM
Interesting and sexy start. I like the pov and the focus on the butt and hole. Locking the cock away is not really interesting to me but getting it so he focuses on his hole was great. Too bad there wasn't top pov rimming of the future good boy. But yeah fun start!

3/24/24, 3:36 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) It's only a precaution. Gotta make sure the boy focuses on other things by removing his vices one by one
CHT
3/24/24, 12:03 AM
Good start ... hope Julian stays aware of whats happening but cant control it for extra embarrassment

3/24/24, 3:35 AM
@[CHT](/user/show/10025789) Don't worry, Ivans is trying to be discreet about this right now until he gets Julian in his clutches 😈
Anonymous
3/23/24, 11:53 PM
Super Hot!!
3/23/24, 2:36 AM
The premise is interesting and has potential, but please avoid using anachronistic language the way. Your use is truly ungrammatical, inconsistent, and it's not even close to what knights of the period you describe would have spoken (the Anglo Saxon of the first Millennium was as different from modern English as German is far from it. It just makes the speech incoherent. I beg of you, stop using language like that.

3/23/24, 10:53 PM
@Callimachus While the grammar is not good, (you don't conjugate "old-fashioned" English verbs by just adding "-eth" to them) the question is whether it is the _author_ who doesn't know that, or the protagonist. "Will" has created the scenario in his imagination; there is no requirement for his vision to be either consistent or accurate. We will have to see what comes along in the next chapter. It also unsafe to talk about anachronism anywhere close to TH White's _Once and Future King_. White's text is consciously anachronistic. His source is Malory's _Morte d'Arthur_, which is a 15th Century retelling of French stories from an earlier, and complx, tradition. Knights in shining armour belong to the "Age of Chivalry" of the "High Middle Ages" - after 1000 (ie 2nd Millennium.) English knights after 1066 would have spoken Norman-French, rather than "Anglo-Saxon". And the stories of Arthur make him _British_, fighting Saxons. He would (if he actually existed) have spoken the language we now refer to as "Brythonic", the predecessor of Welsh, Cornish and Breton.
ChavvyCumCow
3/23/24, 6:33 PM
hot story bruv. like to be in suspended state of control and pleasure.

3/23/24, 10:41 PM
@ChavvyCumCow Thanks! I think a lot of men wouldn't mind being clients here 😅
3/23/24, 8:53 AM
Please make use of Spell Check......

3/23/24, 10:41 PM
@[Kim_Jaewon](/user/show/1327650) My bad, I'm bad about that sometimes haha. I did comb through and make some edits. Hope you enjoyed!
Cool story
3/23/24, 10:35 PM
I would really want to read what happens next…
3/23/24, 10:08 PM
As always I love your stories… and as always, I am massively jealous of the bottom. Lucky lucky Jun.
Anonymous
3/23/24, 6:09 PM
Any timeline on when the next chapter will be released?

3/23/24, 9:50 PM
@Anonymous Working on it today! Hopefully by Tuesday! So prolly not until when the contest ends, unfortunately.