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CHT
3/24/24, 12:03 AM
Good start ... hope Julian stays aware of whats happening but cant control it for extra embarrassment

3/24/24, 3:35 AM
@[CHT](/user/show/10025789) Don't worry, Ivans is trying to be discreet about this right now until he gets Julian in his clutches 😈
Anonymous
3/23/24, 11:53 PM
Super Hot!!
3/23/24, 2:36 AM
The premise is interesting and has potential, but please avoid using anachronistic language the way. Your use is truly ungrammatical, inconsistent, and it's not even close to what knights of the period you describe would have spoken (the Anglo Saxon of the first Millennium was as different from modern English as German is far from it. It just makes the speech incoherent. I beg of you, stop using language like that.

3/23/24, 10:53 PM
@Callimachus While the grammar is not good, (you don't conjugate "old-fashioned" English verbs by just adding "-eth" to them) the question is whether it is the _author_ who doesn't know that, or the protagonist. "Will" has created the scenario in his imagination; there is no requirement for his vision to be either consistent or accurate. We will have to see what comes along in the next chapter. It also unsafe to talk about anachronism anywhere close to TH White's _Once and Future King_. White's text is consciously anachronistic. His source is Malory's _Morte d'Arthur_, which is a 15th Century retelling of French stories from an earlier, and complx, tradition. Knights in shining armour belong to the "Age of Chivalry" of the "High Middle Ages" - after 1000 (ie 2nd Millennium.) English knights after 1066 would have spoken Norman-French, rather than "Anglo-Saxon". And the stories of Arthur make him _British_, fighting Saxons. He would (if he actually existed) have spoken the language we now refer to as "Brythonic", the predecessor of Welsh, Cornish and Breton.
ChavvyCumCow
3/23/24, 6:33 PM
hot story bruv. like to be in suspended state of control and pleasure.

3/23/24, 10:41 PM
@ChavvyCumCow Thanks! I think a lot of men wouldn't mind being clients here 😅
3/23/24, 8:53 AM
Please make use of Spell Check......

3/23/24, 10:41 PM
@[Kim_Jaewon](/user/show/1327650) My bad, I'm bad about that sometimes haha. I did comb through and make some edits. Hope you enjoyed!
Cool story
3/23/24, 10:35 PM
I would really want to read what happens next…
3/23/24, 10:08 PM
As always I love your stories… and as always, I am massively jealous of the bottom. Lucky lucky Jun.
Anonymous
3/23/24, 6:09 PM
Any timeline on when the next chapter will be released?

3/23/24, 9:50 PM
@Anonymous Working on it today! Hopefully by Tuesday! So prolly not until when the contest ends, unfortunately.
3/23/24, 9:30 PM
Hot and entertaining reimagined of Cinderella. I was hoping at the end Sindre would tell the truth to Dom, but oh well. Its still a good story.
3/19/24, 6:56 PM
Just as lovers and friends come into our lives at the right time, so too do stories just like this one. Profoundly touching, in more ways than one 😉🤪 seriously though, thank you for writing such a beautiful work and sharing it for others to enjoy.

OneTimeWriter
3/23/24, 7:06 PM
@[ArcoNorth](/user/show/10032789) Thank you for reading it, and following my beloved characters on their journey! :)