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3/22/24, 6:01 PM
I wasn’t expecting an update until 2 weeks later because I thought the next chapter to be about Duncan getting out of his CUM-LOCKED phase but using the following chapters focusing on Duncan’s CUM-LOCK experience is actually quite genius, I dunno why I didn’t think of it. I hope we get to spend a couple more chapters during this phase, even though it was kinda painful seeing Duncan being shunned and unable to connect to the rest of his team. It just builds that payoff for when he (hopefully, fingers crossed) becomes one of the Lax-bros again. Ultimately, I want to see him PERFORM with his bros in the end. Once again, the induction aspect of this series is very, very excellent and I also find the storytelling really well thought out. I’m really impressed with how the corruption in Mr. Mandrake’s operation really runs deep and I’m intrigued that he seemingly has a hold on the wrestling team as well. I don’t know how major of a role will they play in the story, but I wouldn’t mind adding a bunch of singlet-clad, stiff-prick-leaking boys to the fold ready to PERFORM.
Anonymous
3/22/24, 5:59 PM
This was fun and original! I really enjoyed IT.
3/20/24, 9:09 PM
This is nasty... but I like it! Please continue soon :)

3/22/24, 5:45 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) thank you :)
3/8/24, 3:20 PM
Really hot, great stuff! I like these stories that seem like a personal fantasy from the author, always feels intimate. Small writing tip: remember that character dialogue gets a new paragraph each time the speaker changes. > "Hello," I said, "how are you?" > "I'm fine, thanks." they replied. It's usually always best to add line breaks if there's a lot of action between the dialogue, too. > "I ate the hotdog." I said, rubbing my stomach. > "Then I ate the chips." I said tossing the empty bag into the trash. >"Then I drank the soda." I finished, replacing the bottle cap. Makes it easier for the reader to follow.

3/8/24, 6:54 PM
@[bak2jak](/user/show/141970) [https://i.pinimg.com/736x/f5/09/d6/f509d62a8d7e7f8e327bbc342db8cd43.jpg](https://i.pinimg.com/736x/f5/09/d6/f509d62a8d7e7f8e327bbc342db8cd43.jpg)

3/22/24, 3:46 PM
@[Skyboundbull](/user/show/10006422) While waiting to be asked to give advice can be a good general rule at times, I think their intentions were pure and their tone was very encouraging and constructive. Part of posting any kind of creative work on a public forum is getting criticism. And I'd love to get criticism as thought through and positive as @bak2jak wrote here.
3/22/24, 8:26 AM
Love the start. Also love the premise beign that the MC is kind of a amoral person, who his jollies off with poor King Arthur and his knights. Hoping that he'd have a sadistic side and subject the poor proud knights to humiliation and depravity and get off it seeing proud knights humbled and defeated. Would love them for some to be aware of it but unable to resist his commands too, while spared mental changes
Alison White Slut
3/22/24, 8:14 AM
This is the first story I have read in here - wow! what an introduction. Finally people are realising the superiority of the dominant Black genes and race. :grinning: PS - why are there no black emojis?
3/22/24, 7:48 AM
Brad wouldn't be able to control his impulses and cast another spell, would he? :p
3/22/24, 7:44 AM
This series is amazing. Only problem, I'm struggling to decide whether I want to be the barrista-boy stroking himself or one of the guys compelled to perform!
3/17/24, 12:48 PM
Love this series

3/22/24, 5:42 AM
@[SirD](/user/show/946083) Glad you do! It’s fun to write!
3/14/24, 1:35 PM
So hot! Hope you continue this story!

3/22/24, 5:41 AM
@[S.147](/user/show/10025257) Thank you! Any suggestions/comments are appreciated!