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3/23/24, 12:27 AM
H fucking SHIT this is so damn good!!! 🥵🥵🥵🤤🤤🤤🤩🤩🤩🤩
Mindwinder
3/22/24, 10:03 PM
Once again FreeThinker, you've kicked it out of the park! It's so hot the degree to which Dunc is brainwashed/hypnotised at this point, you've done really well with the progression. Will we be seeing more of the wrestler or was he just a hot prop?
3/22/24, 9:57 PM
😈
Anonymous
3/22/24, 8:25 PM
🥰🥰🥰
3/22/24, 6:41 PM
That visual of the book tarring itself apart and painting a new world was really good lol. This looks like plenty of fun. If you're ever up for it I'd be down to RP something like this tbh. Messing with royalty is always really fun.
Anonymous
3/22/24, 6:38 PM
Great story. More of this please.
3/22/24, 6:01 PM
I wasn’t expecting an update until 2 weeks later because I thought the next chapter to be about Duncan getting out of his CUM-LOCKED phase but using the following chapters focusing on Duncan’s CUM-LOCK experience is actually quite genius, I dunno why I didn’t think of it. I hope we get to spend a couple more chapters during this phase, even though it was kinda painful seeing Duncan being shunned and unable to connect to the rest of his team. It just builds that payoff for when he (hopefully, fingers crossed) becomes one of the Lax-bros again. Ultimately, I want to see him PERFORM with his bros in the end. Once again, the induction aspect of this series is very, very excellent and I also find the storytelling really well thought out. I’m really impressed with how the corruption in Mr. Mandrake’s operation really runs deep and I’m intrigued that he seemingly has a hold on the wrestling team as well. I don’t know how major of a role will they play in the story, but I wouldn’t mind adding a bunch of singlet-clad, stiff-prick-leaking boys to the fold ready to PERFORM.