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Anonymous
3/20/24, 11:42 AM
No loopholes please keep torturing them!! If they end up getting the phone please make them end up being forced to torture themselves!! Can’t wait for the next chapter
3/20/24, 9:55 AM
Great starting chapter! I just wish the mental conversion was a little slower. It would also be interesting to see drones like Jim and Bill assuming their old identities and trying to act "normal" while converting others with the headsets. Looking forward to the next chapter!
3/20/24, 9:02 AM
Hope there will be more chapters after the special event!
3/20/24, 12:07 AM
Preppy stories rule

3/20/24, 8:27 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Indeed they do
3/19/24, 3:55 PM
I've approved this story for the site, but just a heads up that many of your paragraphs are very long, and it makes it hard to read. It's fine to leave it as is if you'd prefer, but you can always submit an edit that breaks up the paragraphs to a more natural length, too. I leave it up to your discretion!

3/19/24, 4:19 PM
@[Nu and the Nus](/user/show/25270) Thanks for the note. I've submitted an edit, hopefully it reads a bit better.

3/19/24, 6:31 PM
@[Hyp-fet](/user/show/933803) It does, thank you! I've approved the edit too. :grin:

Anonymous
3/20/24, 5:25 AM
@[Nu and the Nus](/user/show/25270) I will note that periods are your friend. Not sure what this was like before the edits, but if your sentence has more than 3-4 commas, it really should be broken up into separate sentences. It would make the text much easier to read.

3/20/24, 8:26 AM
@Anonymous Noted, thanks for the feedback. I'll keep that in mind for my future stories.
3/20/24, 6:34 AM
Great series. The last two chapters were especially excellent. Thank you.
pup scuzz
3/20/24, 5:08 AM
Damn this was so hot! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
3/20/24, 4:22 AM
I hope you write more chapters of this story. This is such a great story.
Anonymous
3/17/24, 6:31 PM
I just love this! Please share more!1

Sss
3/20/24, 1:53 AM
@Anonymous ^
3/19/24, 11:25 PM
I loved this chapter! I can understand and relate to Hank having his project boy being messed with, he's a Dom forming boys into their true selves, bringing all their desires to the surface and freeing them to enjoy them under his rule, of course drones would be unexciting to him without a personality, much less, any challenge for him. Being a pup handler, I get the appeal though. A big thank you for that! As for the boys, the new developments are quit intriguing, but I gotta admit, the best moment was when the professor realized it wasn't him moving the gun any longer. Seeing it was Nick who did it was incredibly satisfying, knowing he is now ready to stop playing around and owning the protection of his loved ones. Henry will be there to anchor him, of course, but his willingness to remove such a dangerous person from their lives makes it feel like the boys finally have a shot for real. I hope you get better soon, please take care of yourself. And thank you for another fantastic entry in this series.

3/20/24, 12:43 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thank you! After three days' rest, I can finally reach the mouse and keyboard without aggravating my injury! Oh, and being able to lie down and sleep on my back again is _blisssss!_ Storywise, I'm happy to hear you're finding Hank relatable. These last few chapters as we reach the final showdown should give him a chance to shine in a different way to the old **Tri-Hard**. Hank is a 'people person', in his own way, where Ernst was very much not. Ernst enjoys reaching solutions, while Hank likes the journey,... if you get what I mean. With our heroes, Nick has finally found his footing. He'd been suffering from a sort of impostor syndrome, even from pretty early on, but seeing such a direct threat to Henry pushed him over the edge into action. Nick struggled with the idea of being a hero after being forced into it by Henry's command and, just like Henry, he couldn't BE the hero he thought he had to be. After his chats with Charles and his revenge, Nick might finally be free of those concerns. He knows he can't be some sort of 'paragon',... but he can save Henry and the others who depend on him!