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3/20/24, 1:30 PM
Great start. Thank you!
Anonymous
3/20/24, 11:42 AM
No loopholes please keep torturing them!! If they end up getting the phone please make them end up being forced to torture themselves!! Can’t wait for the next chapter
3/20/24, 9:55 AM
Great starting chapter! I just wish the mental conversion was a little slower. It would also be interesting to see drones like Jim and Bill assuming their old identities and trying to act "normal" while converting others with the headsets. Looking forward to the next chapter!
3/20/24, 9:02 AM
Hope there will be more chapters after the special event!
3/20/24, 12:07 AM
Preppy stories rule

3/20/24, 8:27 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Indeed they do
3/19/24, 3:55 PM
I've approved this story for the site, but just a heads up that many of your paragraphs are very long, and it makes it hard to read. It's fine to leave it as is if you'd prefer, but you can always submit an edit that breaks up the paragraphs to a more natural length, too. I leave it up to your discretion!

3/19/24, 4:19 PM
@[Nu and the Nus](/user/show/25270) Thanks for the note. I've submitted an edit, hopefully it reads a bit better.

3/19/24, 6:31 PM
@[Hyp-fet](/user/show/933803) It does, thank you! I've approved the edit too. :grin:

Anonymous
3/20/24, 5:25 AM
@[Nu and the Nus](/user/show/25270) I will note that periods are your friend. Not sure what this was like before the edits, but if your sentence has more than 3-4 commas, it really should be broken up into separate sentences. It would make the text much easier to read.

3/20/24, 8:26 AM
@Anonymous Noted, thanks for the feedback. I'll keep that in mind for my future stories.
3/20/24, 6:34 AM
Great series. The last two chapters were especially excellent. Thank you.
pup scuzz
3/20/24, 5:08 AM
Damn this was so hot! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
3/20/24, 4:22 AM
I hope you write more chapters of this story. This is such a great story.
Anonymous
3/17/24, 6:31 PM
I just love this! Please share more!1

Sss
3/20/24, 1:53 AM
@Anonymous ^