Recent Comments

3/19/24, 10:43 AM
You guys are making me more eager even than Dunc to get to the end of those two weeks!
3/19/24, 10:15 AM
Hot
3/19/24, 7:51 AM
Oh damn!! 🤩
3/19/24, 7:43 AM
Hot one! Glad you're back to writing!
3/18/24, 11:47 PM
Once again: incredibly hot, FreeThinker! I'm wondering if Dunc will be knocked down a peg to Beta-Bro after his two weeks are up and he'll be the one getting fucked by Sanchez? At any rate, can't wait for the next chapter!

3/18/24, 11:55 PM
@[Mindwinder] I personally dont want this to happen because that kinda implies that being beta/bottom = a punishment/being “knocked down a peg” which isn’t really true. There is no shame in bottoming and therefore I don’t think it should be portrayed as lesser/ something undesirable. I dunno just my thoughts

3/19/24, 12:17 AM
@[Rad Pits](/user/show/2239300) My dude, this is a story about straight guys being hypnotized into fucking each other. Don't you think ethics, re: your concerns, are kind of already out the window?

3/19/24, 1:12 AM
@[Mindwinder] Like I stated in the comment above, I said those were purely MY opinions and thoughts, so no, I don’t think it’s out the window cuz you can respectfully just agree or disagree with it. In the grand scheme of things, I don’t really care much whether the author decides to make Dunc a beta or not as a form of punishment. I just shared my perspective on why I think its probably not a great idea to do so and anyone can take that however they will

3/19/24, 1:56 AM
@[Rad Pits](/user/show/2239300) Yeah, fair enough. I personally just think it's kind of funny to care about such things given the context of the story, and more broadly this site.

3/19/24, 3:11 AM
@[Mindwinder] Ehh. I just feel like muscle jock turned to bottoms as form of punishment feels kinda tried and cliche at this point and done so many times in other stories that I kinda wanna want something different
Anonymous
3/19/24, 12:26 AM
Terrific work Thanks

3/19/24, 1:48 AM
@Anonymous Thanks to you, glad you enjoyed it.
3/19/24, 1:31 AM
"I'm going to go shower". I have a feeling that disclosing that fact might turn out to be.. a mistake. Next chapter spicey in a new way, perhaps?
2/15/24, 9:11 AM
The way scent is driving him into need and his body changing to crave being filled with cum is really fun to watch. The exposition of lore is welcome and sprinkled in enough to get a sense of what's happening. Dane is sweet, I hope they get to spend more time together the three of them. It is such a shame our hero's change is happening so fast. I think he'd love being opened up by a lot of beta cocks to prepare for the monster Alpha coach is sporting. That the Alpha loses his senses and goes into rut is very hot too. Look forward to the next chapter.

3/18/24, 8:30 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks for the comment! It's nice to get some feedback and know what I'm doing right :grin:. I did want the first scenes to feel more intimate and personal and not just thurst a bunch of never-before-mentioned dicks in the mix (tho lemme tell you I was tempted). Still, I do have plans for someone to be opened up by a lot of cocks ;)

3/19/24, 1:21 AM
@[GoodBoyPuppy](/user/show/10028663) I think you achieved this. It's nice to get more of a connection to the other dicks coming in. ;) Mmm, your plan to have someone opened up by a lot of cocks is all the more reason to eagerly anticipate another chapter when it's ready. I was already excited!
Sss
3/17/24, 11:23 PM
Well, you do suck a good cock Should be Well, you do suck a cock well. Enjoyed it

3/19/24, 1:08 AM
@[Sss](/user/show/10004965) Oh I read this as riffing on a more conventional expression (aka, “well, you do cook a mean steak”). So I read the grammatical construction as being intentional, and part of the joke? At least that was my take on it…