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2/15/24, 9:11 AM
The way scent is driving him into need and his body changing to crave being filled with cum is really fun to watch. The exposition of lore is welcome and sprinkled in enough to get a sense of what's happening. Dane is sweet, I hope they get to spend more time together the three of them. It is such a shame our hero's change is happening so fast. I think he'd love being opened up by a lot of beta cocks to prepare for the monster Alpha coach is sporting. That the Alpha loses his senses and goes into rut is very hot too. Look forward to the next chapter.

3/18/24, 8:30 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks for the comment! It's nice to get some feedback and know what I'm doing right :grin:. I did want the first scenes to feel more intimate and personal and not just thurst a bunch of never-before-mentioned dicks in the mix (tho lemme tell you I was tempted). Still, I do have plans for someone to be opened up by a lot of cocks ;)

3/19/24, 1:21 AM
@[GoodBoyPuppy](/user/show/10028663) I think you achieved this. It's nice to get more of a connection to the other dicks coming in. ;) Mmm, your plan to have someone opened up by a lot of cocks is all the more reason to eagerly anticipate another chapter when it's ready. I was already excited!
Sss
3/17/24, 11:23 PM
Well, you do suck a good cock Should be Well, you do suck a cock well. Enjoyed it

3/19/24, 1:08 AM
@[Sss](/user/show/10004965) Oh I read this as riffing on a more conventional expression (aka, “well, you do cook a mean steak”). So I read the grammatical construction as being intentional, and part of the joke? At least that was my take on it…
3/19/24, 12:35 AM
Love Monty’s emotional evolution. Really looking forward to part 4.
Thom
3/19/24, 12:18 AM
Since it's your first story, I want to be completely honest with you: The premise is really hot! I'm definitely on the same page as you; sex crazed muscular zombies is a turn on for me too, so your story is very hot. The main thing that took me out of it was your grammatical and spelling errors. They didn't bother me too much and I could understand what you were trying to convey, but this is something you probably wanna continue working on in the future. And I 100% recommend that you continue writing. Not only do I want to see you finish this story, but it's a great way to practice your writing! Good luck with the rest if you decide to write more, friend 😄

3/19/24, 12:25 AM
@[Thom](/user/show/908711) Thanks, I knew they were going to be a lot of grammatical mistakes in there. English it’s not my native language, I would try to use some tool or something next time to correct those mistakes. Yeah I plan to write more soon because I have a lot free time coming up. Thank you for the advice, the great feedback and I glad someone loves the concept of craze muscle zombies much as I do.
Anonymous
3/19/24, 12:02 AM
I enjoyed it a lot.

3/19/24, 12:06 AM
@Anonymous Than you, that means a lot cause it’s my first time trying it, really glad you enjoyed it
3/18/24, 10:07 PM
next?!

3/18/24, 11:41 PM
@[nystrele](/user/show/10011719) Will be released soon 😉
3/18/24, 9:48 PM
Scary and hot

3/18/24, 10:41 PM
@[Dream maker](/user/show/908635) Thanks, that’s the vibe i was going for. Any comment I appreciate it specially for my first try writing something like this.
Jan 25, 2021
3/18/24, 9:31 PM
This story is hot! The induction crept up on me, and before I knew it the first-person narrator and hypnotist had me slipping into trance! And Ron -- see Ron's comment above -- has a great idea... An insidious idea, but in a really hot way...
Anonymous
3/18/24, 8:45 PM
This is such a good well-written story! Can't wait to read what happens next.
3/1/24, 3:15 PM
I am a NUT about the smells of men and ... this is such great storytelling. THANK YOU

3/18/24, 8:34 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank you so much! :heart_eyes: