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3/17/24, 5:35 AM
Your stories always manage to put a big smile on my face, Charlie! Capable of both being entertaining and incredibly hot! Your casual style of writing is really delivering in droves here, keep up the amazing work and keep those big booties coming! :wink:
3/10/24, 9:00 AM
This chapter did not disappoint! Love how it started in Yusuf's house and got some "behind the scenes" of how he lives (and setting up the possibility of future installments with the other inventions :) i would love to see every one of those inventions used in different stories/spinoffs). Sounds like John and Pete's friends will make an appearance ("say whatever you need to to get them here")! So excited for this, and to see what Yusuf will make them into. Also excited to see how the void in Pops' heart will be fixed. Is he going to forget his wife? Or assume a different role within the (new) Berger clan? I said this as a joke before (that Eddie might end up ad the family dog, if Yusuf was feeling sadistic), but I kind of am curious to see how far the gloves can take things. Seems like they can supernaturally increase cum production (beyond normal human limits)...could they handle ftm/mtf transformations? Transformations into different species? Inanimate? Again, hoping Eddie gets to share in the fun in the end, but would love to dive deeper into the lore of the gloves. And after all the changes are made, will Yusuf use the Reality Distorter to make all of his changes normal? Assuming they are permanent, how would everyone not affected by the gloves (i.e., Hank, the neighbor) deal with the Bergers' transformations? Again, not trying to influence your writing, and I really hope these posts aren't annoying 🙈 this is one of my favorite stories on the site (even with only 3 chapters posted), and it's really engaging to organize my thoughts like this. BTW, how did the surgery go? Hope you are well!

3/12/24, 3:25 AM
@[Redtrojan1987](/user/show/1770116) Thank you so much for the kind words!! Not annoying in the slightest <3 and the LASIK went perfectly! Just on a steady rotation of eye drops for a month :P But waking up to a not blurry world is lovely!

3/17/24, 4:37 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Good, I'm so glad the surgery went well! I hope I can reach out when author names are revealed :)
Anonymous
3/17/24, 3:27 AM
Great installment! like always, how you create characters and show us their inner machinations is phenomenal. Loving how the gears in Monty’s mind are slowly moving lol
Mar 16, 2024
3/17/24, 2:29 AM
You’ve done it again. Another favorite.

3/17/24, 3:10 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you! ✨
Anonymous
3/17/24, 1:49 AM
Loving this series!!
3/17/24, 1:20 AM
Amazing!!! I want more
3/17/24, 12:17 AM
Can't wait for the next story !!!!!
Muscle-Flex
3/17/24, 12:05 AM
Whoosh... bang! That's me falling over in amazement... or maybe a horny stupor. What a seduction!!! The dialogue, the mental games, the physical manipulation... you made it all seem real and plausible. Fantastic job!
3/12/24, 9:59 PM
This was a fun ride! Only advice I’d give you is to make sure you split paragraphs up when a different person talks. Dialogue can get confusing when everything‘s in the same paragraph.

3/16/24, 8:50 PM
@[Hargoni](/user/show/912212) Thank you a lot for a good tip. This story will definitely continue and I will pay attention to your advice.
Mar 15, 2024
3/16/24, 7:08 PM
Great filthy story mmm! 😋