Recent Comments

ADL
3/14/24, 5:02 PM
I love daddy/boy stories!
Muscle-Flex
3/14/24, 4:18 PM
So freakin' hot, bro! You really captured the flavor of the kind of stories you were referencing. And the ending was great - right on target. You can leave it there or bring Mitch back for further adventures down the road.
Anonymous
3/14/24, 2:51 PM
Loved it!
3/14/24, 10:31 AM
What a fucking slow burn. Made the payoff at the end fantastic!!
3/14/24, 9:42 AM
I really enjoyed this first chapter of what I am sure will be an epic tale. I to found myself in various yahoo groups and realized I was not alone. I love your slow approach and especially all the detail. I definitely miss Superman erotic stories site and I wish I would have saved all my favorites, but I didn't. You are an incredible writer!! Please keep this momentum going and make Superman pay and be humiliated!@
Anonymous
3/14/24, 6:04 AM
I like the character arcs! Yusuf is angry, and frustrated. He’s force feeding it to the source, the Bergers. Making Edgar be a participant makes the story awesome and gives him dimension. When I think the plot will zig, it zags.
Tim
3/14/24, 3:58 AM
Great story and writing!
3/14/24, 3:07 AM
Very hot and sexy. perfect part for jacking off! The expanded and altered sexual responses was very well done. They didn't just turn gay. The found the mutual attraction and the natural response to that attraction to one another. It flowed very well.
Willie Cici
3/14/24, 2:53 AM
Keep writing. You're off to a good start.

3/14/24, 2:55 AM
@Willie Cici actually just finished a second part haha