Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/14/24, 6:04 AM
I like the character arcs! Yusuf is angry, and frustrated. He’s force feeding it to the source, the Bergers. Making Edgar be a participant makes the story awesome and gives him dimension. When I think the plot will zig, it zags.
Tim
3/14/24, 3:58 AM
Great story and writing!
3/14/24, 3:07 AM
Very hot and sexy. perfect part for jacking off! The expanded and altered sexual responses was very well done. They didn't just turn gay. The found the mutual attraction and the natural response to that attraction to one another. It flowed very well.
Willie Cici
3/14/24, 2:53 AM
Keep writing. You're off to a good start.

3/14/24, 2:55 AM
@Willie Cici actually just finished a second part haha
3/14/24, 2:50 AM
Amazing story as always :heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes:
3/13/24, 8:22 PM
Great story -- terrific takedown. though I admit, I kept expecting the tables to turn, but it read beautifully. Nice job!

3/14/24, 1:52 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thanks @absman420. I appreciate the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Muscle-Flex
3/14/24, 1:36 AM
“Wait…… where are you taking me? Arghhh….Chris wake up…ughhh.” Whew! Simple lines, but DANG, they took me over the edge. I could picture Officer Bradley, his big muscles useless for anything except squirming as he got carried off to a night he won't forget! I knew what was coming in this chapter, but, man, you really delivered. Everything was described in the most erotic way and the dialog just added to the heat! Definitely the best cop take-down story I've ever read. :muscle::policeman:
3/5/24, 9:31 AM
Hi all, thank you for all of the messages and interest. Unfortunately, I’ve been busy with work and haven’t had a chance to write. Hoping to write again in April and get the next chapter out next month. Hope everyone comes back and enjoys the next chapter once it’s out!

Muscle-Flex
3/14/24, 1:19 AM
@[LockedsubLA](/user/show/10008884) We will look forward to it! You've got a hot, humorous, and very fun story here! Thanks for the effort you put into it. :muscle:
Muscle-Flex
3/13/24, 11:35 PM
Holy smokes this was hot! As per your suggestion, I followed the link and read the original first. That author did a great job with the set-up and creative explanation of how Lex gets Superman into this situation. And now you have written a great sequel! As others have said, the erotic, sensual, and psychological build-up are fantastic. What an ingenious trap Lex is developing. You've got me on the edge of my seat! :muscle:

3/14/24, 1:12 AM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Thanks so much! And I'm glad you checked out the original. It's so well written and such an interesting concept. I'm excited to keep unpacking it!
3/11/24, 8:58 PM
I must say BRAVO Antinoos! The read was a slowburn, erotic and sensual, with all the makings of a Lex Luthor conquest-- cunning & villanous, but with the pleasurable buildup & twist:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: I'm looking forward to the next chapter!! Applause!!!:clap:

3/14/24, 1:11 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Gotta love those Lex Luthor conquests! Thank you for your kind words.