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Anonymous
3/14/24, 2:51 PM
Loved it!
3/14/24, 10:31 AM
What a fucking slow burn. Made the payoff at the end fantastic!!
3/14/24, 9:42 AM
I really enjoyed this first chapter of what I am sure will be an epic tale. I to found myself in various yahoo groups and realized I was not alone. I love your slow approach and especially all the detail. I definitely miss Superman erotic stories site and I wish I would have saved all my favorites, but I didn't. You are an incredible writer!! Please keep this momentum going and make Superman pay and be humiliated!@
Anonymous
3/14/24, 6:04 AM
I like the character arcs! Yusuf is angry, and frustrated. He’s force feeding it to the source, the Bergers. Making Edgar be a participant makes the story awesome and gives him dimension. When I think the plot will zig, it zags.
Tim
3/14/24, 3:58 AM
Great story and writing!
3/14/24, 3:07 AM
Very hot and sexy. perfect part for jacking off! The expanded and altered sexual responses was very well done. They didn't just turn gay. The found the mutual attraction and the natural response to that attraction to one another. It flowed very well.
Willie Cici
3/14/24, 2:53 AM
Keep writing. You're off to a good start.

3/14/24, 2:55 AM
@Willie Cici actually just finished a second part haha
3/14/24, 2:50 AM
Amazing story as always :heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes:
3/13/24, 8:22 PM
Great story -- terrific takedown. though I admit, I kept expecting the tables to turn, but it read beautifully. Nice job!

3/14/24, 1:52 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thanks @absman420. I appreciate the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Muscle-Flex
3/14/24, 1:36 AM
“Wait…… where are you taking me? Arghhh….Chris wake up…ughhh.” Whew! Simple lines, but DANG, they took me over the edge. I could picture Officer Bradley, his big muscles useless for anything except squirming as he got carried off to a night he won't forget! I knew what was coming in this chapter, but, man, you really delivered. Everything was described in the most erotic way and the dialog just added to the heat! Definitely the best cop take-down story I've ever read. :muscle::policeman: