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AlphaBro
3/14/24, 12:24 PM
Blazing. So erotic. I’m just in awe of the writing. Everything is so detailed. The images you paint are so specific, clear, intense. I can see it all in my mind’s eye. You are an incredible writer. I’ve already read this story 3 times and will read many more. Cannot wait for the next chapter? I’ll stop gushing now. ;-) Thank you!

3/14/24, 5:11 PM
@AlphaBro Thanks AB! I appreciate the compliments. Thanks for reading.
3/14/24, 10:50 AM
Great job. Thumbs up *wink*

3/14/24, 5:09 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thanks Kyle. Much appreciated.
ADL
3/14/24, 5:02 PM
I love daddy/boy stories!
Muscle-Flex
3/14/24, 4:18 PM
So freakin' hot, bro! You really captured the flavor of the kind of stories you were referencing. And the ending was great - right on target. You can leave it there or bring Mitch back for further adventures down the road.
Anonymous
3/14/24, 2:51 PM
Loved it!
3/14/24, 10:31 AM
What a fucking slow burn. Made the payoff at the end fantastic!!
3/14/24, 9:42 AM
I really enjoyed this first chapter of what I am sure will be an epic tale. I to found myself in various yahoo groups and realized I was not alone. I love your slow approach and especially all the detail. I definitely miss Superman erotic stories site and I wish I would have saved all my favorites, but I didn't. You are an incredible writer!! Please keep this momentum going and make Superman pay and be humiliated!@
Anonymous
3/14/24, 6:04 AM
I like the character arcs! Yusuf is angry, and frustrated. He’s force feeding it to the source, the Bergers. Making Edgar be a participant makes the story awesome and gives him dimension. When I think the plot will zig, it zags.
Tim
3/14/24, 3:58 AM
Great story and writing!