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eagerboy415
3/6/24, 9:43 AM
This rocked! I loved it so much

3/12/24, 8:34 PM
@[eagerboy415](/user/show/10007400) thanks for reading :magic_wand:
Cb2
3/11/24, 3:57 PM
This is terrific. I have bookmarked only a handful of stories over the years and I immediately knew this would be one I will be returning to again and again. This is the fourth time of reading it. It took 3 attempts before i managed to hold off cumming before the end. Really well done. More please!

3/12/24, 8:34 PM
@[Cb2](/user/show/10037473) oh wow, such a compliment! thank you! wish I had all the time in the world to write this stuff, but when I do... I'm glad people enjoy it :)
3/12/24, 3:23 PM
So hot. And I wonder what the 3 o’clock appointment involves.

3/12/24, 7:58 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I think this is where I’m gonna leave this one for now but not a bad question lol
3/12/24, 7:39 PM
Good chapter, interested to see how it ends. Poor Jax(ton) just wanted to help people, but find out he accidentally ruined lives and gets yelled at by his boss. We'll see if things get better for him or not. Thanks for adding the description of Alex, i appreciate it.
WolfPrince
3/12/24, 7:12 PM
I really love the 'romantic' aspect of this - I dunno why, but it really added something to the story for me that I was wanting. If the story continues, and Brandon keeps being in the story, I hope that the two of them continue to dominate the world side-by-side as equals. I don't think we see enough of that type of thing here
3/12/24, 7:12 PM
Love this.
3/12/24, 6:35 PM
Thanks, Kyle, for a super hot Master/slave story. Unlike Amul, I think there is enough indication of Mark's and Alex's deep natural connection for me to see romance in the story. I found it particularly hot that Alex had in fact been Mark's mysterious weekend slave for the previous 2 years. Also that Mark arranged to have not only a slave husband but also a live-in slave. I hope it develops into a threesome+ polyamorous M/s family! The only adverse comments from me are the apparently not so consensual coerced straight-to-gay transformation, and the insufficient detail of the mind training and control process. Admittedly my comments reflect more my personal fetishes and preferences than any real flaws in the story. Still I am constantly disappointed with how many authors seem to think that a straight-to-gay transformation makes a transformation story hot. What's wrong with transforming a reticent gay man into the BDSM/slave lifestyle? Regarding the mind control/training, I am an avid subject of hypnosis recordings. Unless I am a poor subject and incapable of seriously deep hypnosis, I find it takes months and months of audio training to have much affect at all. I have yet (as far as I know!) been induced to forget anything very significant through the hypnosis. Because I enjoy hypnosis so much I want to learn more about how it can really be used to make mind control more effective, and what other elements exist for mind control. It would be fantastic (though admittedly rather unreasonable) to find at least a touch of this realistic detailed information in a fictional story.
3/12/24, 5:44 PM
Hot
3/12/24, 4:21 PM
Ooh that was a hot massage. Cant wait for the steamier "happy ending" of the massage.

3/12/24, 5:07 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Oh it's definitely shaping up to be steamier, but not sure how "happy" Eric and Chris will be about it 😈
Anonymous
3/12/24, 4:13 PM
v hot!