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3/12/24, 7:12 PM
Love this.
3/12/24, 6:35 PM
Thanks, Kyle, for a super hot Master/slave story. Unlike Amul, I think there is enough indication of Mark's and Alex's deep natural connection for me to see romance in the story. I found it particularly hot that Alex had in fact been Mark's mysterious weekend slave for the previous 2 years. Also that Mark arranged to have not only a slave husband but also a live-in slave. I hope it develops into a threesome+ polyamorous M/s family! The only adverse comments from me are the apparently not so consensual coerced straight-to-gay transformation, and the insufficient detail of the mind training and control process. Admittedly my comments reflect more my personal fetishes and preferences than any real flaws in the story. Still I am constantly disappointed with how many authors seem to think that a straight-to-gay transformation makes a transformation story hot. What's wrong with transforming a reticent gay man into the BDSM/slave lifestyle? Regarding the mind control/training, I am an avid subject of hypnosis recordings. Unless I am a poor subject and incapable of seriously deep hypnosis, I find it takes months and months of audio training to have much affect at all. I have yet (as far as I know!) been induced to forget anything very significant through the hypnosis. Because I enjoy hypnosis so much I want to learn more about how it can really be used to make mind control more effective, and what other elements exist for mind control. It would be fantastic (though admittedly rather unreasonable) to find at least a touch of this realistic detailed information in a fictional story.
3/12/24, 5:44 PM
Hot
3/12/24, 4:21 PM
Ooh that was a hot massage. Cant wait for the steamier "happy ending" of the massage.

3/12/24, 5:07 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Oh it's definitely shaping up to be steamier, but not sure how "happy" Eric and Chris will be about it 😈
Anonymous
3/12/24, 4:13 PM
v hot!
3/12/24, 3:55 PM
I really liked this! Extremely well-written and super-creative. Looking forward to what happens next to our hapless secret agent!
3/12/24, 9:06 AM
Happy to see another chapter of this. Big fan of massages in stories. Long may this series continue.

3/12/24, 3:46 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Thanks! I really like how this story is turning out. The next chapter is shaping up to be longer and steamier then this one!
Nerdyjock
3/11/24, 3:20 PM
I sure hope you write another chapter. I'd like to see what happens in the local town.

3/12/24, 2:25 PM
@[Nerdyjock](/user/show/10046358) I'll consider it.
3/12/24, 1:47 PM
Bienvenidos a la zona de comentarios, espero hayas disfrutado de esta historia algo larga... en todo caso, las nalgas de Oliver en esta ocasión estarán "sujetando" cada comentario que coloques. :peach:
3/11/24, 5:27 PM
I really enjoyed this and a part 2 would be wonderful, don’t you agree?

3/12/24, 8:30 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) You're right! I'll get right on that