Recent Comments

3/11/24, 5:53 PM
great pacing, amazing characters and the kinks were on top it took me nearly 3 hours and several tissues to get through this but it was well worth it, truly one of the best stories I had read in a long time
3/10/24, 8:04 AM
I'm guessing the 2 other chapters will come after the competition ends? I don't think I can wait that long! But I'm rooting for you < The Author (name hidden despite being very clear who this is)>

3/11/24, 4:57 PM
@[yetanotheranonymous](/user/show/971894) < The Author (name hidden despite being very clear who this is)> - this literally made me crack up. But yeah, the rest will be coming later!
Anonymous
3/11/24, 4:44 PM
The end? Will it continue?
3/11/24, 4:13 PM
Not enough attention on this series. Fucking amazing straight to gay wishing, love when clearly gay acts are even seen as straight, even into there being no women in their society.
3/10/24, 10:14 AM
Thanks for the story. Great as always :) Is there any possibility for knowing the story about the transformation of Tino?

Willie Cici
3/10/24, 6:45 PM
@[LTTL](/user/show/911183) I'm working on a prequel

3/11/24, 3:34 PM
@Willie Cici :heart:
3/9/24, 7:10 PM
Yes, it is a great story. I hope there is more to come.

3/11/24, 3:00 PM
@[Mailman2020!](/user/show/938360) Just posted Chapter 5
3/9/24, 3:06 PM
This story is so cute and hot. I hope it never ends.

3/11/24, 3:00 PM
@[TheWalkingAlive](/user/show/925088) It was written with five chapters in mind, but Wart and Thwollow haven't fully relinquished me yet, so we'll see.
9/24/21, 4:40 AM
You guys really know how to take the fun out of writing. Your pithy criticisms have made me decide not to continue writing for this site.

Asc
3/11/24, 12:58 PM
@[MrBolt14](/user/show/10014392) Although I understand your frustration, I believe people's reactions are quite understandable. I assume this is about the directly above comment. Your work is beautifully written, but I believe the uncomfortableness some people have is because of the relative youth and innocence of the boy. The work puts most of the blame and hate of Martinez to the father, however the punishment is on the son. It's somewhat unfair. If the boy was irredeemable, if he was a rapist or a bully that ruined people's lives, people would be more inclined on seeing him being mind-fucked. Or maybe if the brunt of blame was shifted from the father to Seb, like he was the reason Martinez had a bad time in the company, it would be looked upon as justified. Your work was amazing, loved the plot and where it went. I still hope you continue to write for the site and am looking forward to more of your work. This isn't a rebuke or an instruction to do something else, just an explanation to my and some other's reaction. I, myself, am still incredibly entertained and in love with your work.
3/11/24, 11:56 AM
I would be unsurprised to learn that Brandon has been programmed not to notice that he has a scar on the back of his neck. Anyone who has enough computer knowledge to make a master key is dangerous if they ever decide to turn on you, so I could see Sebastian just… quietly removing that option.

3/11/24, 12:48 PM
@[Nodara](/user/show/970256) Yeah, same thought
Asc
3/11/24, 12:25 PM
Feel bad for the blond boy. The sexual parts are hot though!