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3/9/24, 7:10 PM
Yes, it is a great story. I hope there is more to come.

3/11/24, 3:00 PM
@[Mailman2020!](/user/show/938360) Just posted Chapter 5
3/9/24, 3:06 PM
This story is so cute and hot. I hope it never ends.

3/11/24, 3:00 PM
@[TheWalkingAlive](/user/show/925088) It was written with five chapters in mind, but Wart and Thwollow haven't fully relinquished me yet, so we'll see.
9/24/21, 4:40 AM
You guys really know how to take the fun out of writing. Your pithy criticisms have made me decide not to continue writing for this site.

Asc
3/11/24, 12:58 PM
@[MrBolt14](/user/show/10014392) Although I understand your frustration, I believe people's reactions are quite understandable. I assume this is about the directly above comment. Your work is beautifully written, but I believe the uncomfortableness some people have is because of the relative youth and innocence of the boy. The work puts most of the blame and hate of Martinez to the father, however the punishment is on the son. It's somewhat unfair. If the boy was irredeemable, if he was a rapist or a bully that ruined people's lives, people would be more inclined on seeing him being mind-fucked. Or maybe if the brunt of blame was shifted from the father to Seb, like he was the reason Martinez had a bad time in the company, it would be looked upon as justified. Your work was amazing, loved the plot and where it went. I still hope you continue to write for the site and am looking forward to more of your work. This isn't a rebuke or an instruction to do something else, just an explanation to my and some other's reaction. I, myself, am still incredibly entertained and in love with your work.
3/11/24, 11:56 AM
I would be unsurprised to learn that Brandon has been programmed not to notice that he has a scar on the back of his neck. Anyone who has enough computer knowledge to make a master key is dangerous if they ever decide to turn on you, so I could see Sebastian just… quietly removing that option.

3/11/24, 12:48 PM
@[Nodara](/user/show/970256) Yeah, same thought
Asc
3/11/24, 12:25 PM
Feel bad for the blond boy. The sexual parts are hot though!
3/11/24, 7:09 AM
I’m really rooting for thiss series to win the challenge. There are many great entries, but this series just feels like the best for me
3/11/24, 4:48 AM
I’m surprised that the Employer fell in love with a person and don’t make him a loyal drone. I thought he could not trust anybody. Nice sequel.
Anonymous
3/11/24, 4:24 AM
v hot!
Anonymous
3/11/24, 4:04 AM
each chapter has been hot… hope for some more!!!
3/11/24, 3:47 AM
I like where this is going.