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3/11/24, 1:20 AM
Glad you enjoyed it! I owe a lot to the old NCMC. I do still have plans to do finish this when I have more time and I'm less depressed.
3/11/24, 1:18 AM
Thanks for the comment! I have a draft of the next chapter, but I've been super busy lately. Hopefully I'll wrap this story up this year.
3/10/24, 11:25 PM
Another classic Hypnothrill story. I always come back to this one every now and then. Just imagining the chaos in the base us enough to excite me.
Anonymous
3/10/24, 10:36 PM
hot!!!
Mar 10, 2024
3/10/24, 10:04 PM
The king of obliviousness and unaware mind control strikes again! I love these. I'm sad every time at how quickly they end,but then again I have to read them more and more lol. The 'good little coach boy' line did things to me.
Anonymous
3/10/24, 8:38 PM
I hope John gets trained like a slut in the future too, seeing that Alpha dominates Daniel by the epilogue. At that time, John mayhaps craved to be dominated as well 😋
3/10/24, 11:06 AM
I'm still loving it! However, I found the first part confusing about being incorporeal. I may just be tired, though, because I'm sick at the moment. Will have to read it again later I think. Also, the pipes disappeared! :( I really would love to see more stories like this. I bet a final chapter of vignettes chronicling the world daddification plan would be amazing! :) You definitely have me hooked!

3/10/24, 8:19 PM
@[FatBoy54](/user/show/144054) For the pipes, that was unfortunately a "wanted to focus on other things" and I figured it's the sort of detail that would fade into the background as he succumbs more and more to his reality warping around him. Glad to hear it though, I definitely have plenty of other ideas floating around in this vein, just gotta get to them and write. Much appreciated!

3/10/24, 8:22 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I really look forward to more of your work... once we know who you are! :laughing:
Malemann54
3/10/24, 7:56 PM
Remember reading this years ago, was disappointed there was no sequel.
3/10/24, 6:14 PM
Would like to find out about Amos’s friend…..
3/10/24, 5:18 PM
I never thought I’d find these themes so engaging. You’re a really good writer, even though stuff seems to happen quickly there’s a lot of excellent slow burn! For the ending, I hope the gloves break, and everyone’s Brain resets back to normal, but the physical changes remain!