Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/10/24, 8:38 PM
I hope John gets trained like a slut in the future too, seeing that Alpha dominates Daniel by the epilogue. At that time, John mayhaps craved to be dominated as well 😋
3/10/24, 11:06 AM
I'm still loving it! However, I found the first part confusing about being incorporeal. I may just be tired, though, because I'm sick at the moment. Will have to read it again later I think. Also, the pipes disappeared! :( I really would love to see more stories like this. I bet a final chapter of vignettes chronicling the world daddification plan would be amazing! :) You definitely have me hooked!

3/10/24, 8:19 PM
@[FatBoy54](/user/show/144054) For the pipes, that was unfortunately a "wanted to focus on other things" and I figured it's the sort of detail that would fade into the background as he succumbs more and more to his reality warping around him. Glad to hear it though, I definitely have plenty of other ideas floating around in this vein, just gotta get to them and write. Much appreciated!

3/10/24, 8:22 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I really look forward to more of your work... once we know who you are! :laughing:
Malemann54
3/10/24, 7:56 PM
Remember reading this years ago, was disappointed there was no sequel.
3/10/24, 6:14 PM
Would like to find out about Amos’s friend…..
3/10/24, 5:18 PM
I never thought I’d find these themes so engaging. You’re a really good writer, even though stuff seems to happen quickly there’s a lot of excellent slow burn! For the ending, I hope the gloves break, and everyone’s Brain resets back to normal, but the physical changes remain!
3/10/24, 4:20 PM
Just absolutely awesome.
Anonymous
3/10/24, 4:16 PM
This is based on one of my favorite books. Would never have imagined seeing it used as source material here. Loved this!
Anonymous
3/10/24, 3:49 PM
There are some important content tags that you should include given the nature of your story. Also, the word choices you made were distracting. There were a few places where your overly verbose descriptions focused too much on showing off a broad vocabulary and less on explaining what was actually happening.
Anonymous
3/10/24, 3:35 PM
This is everything, I seriously can't wait for the next updates!!
Anonymous
3/10/24, 3:29 PM
Ain't it romantic? Being kidnapped by a guy who would sacrifice everything to save you? Hopefully Josh and Daniel can sort out all their repressed feelings and just kiss each other before this messy situation gets even messier. As for Matt... Good luck, lmfao! Imagine finally realizing how much of a dick you were to someone who genuinely loves you and then finding your home looking like a bomb just dropped. I'm praying that Luke is fine.