Recent Comments

3/9/24, 1:34 AM
Holy shit! This captures the mad science challenge concept so well! And the transformations were incredibly hot too! Great story! I love how it kinda has a happy ending too!
3/9/24, 12:24 AM
i won't lie, the very opening line of this immediately turned me off. "It was a dark and stormy night because of course it was. This is a vaguely ~~horror themed Halloween~~ science themed competition erotic mind control story, what other kind of night was it going to take place on?" a little humor is fine in erotic stories but the narrator undercutting the entire premise from the very start, and a hackneyed old dark and stormy night joke too? did not give me high hopes for the rest.
Anonymous
2/28/24, 7:02 PM
Any timeline for the next chapters? I check the site every couple of hours in hopes the next one is posted :)

3/8/24, 10:17 PM
@Anonymous Wow! I’ve now taken to checking for an update several times a day too! 😔

3/9/24, 12:15 AM
@[OU812](/user/show/14254) I’m NEARLY done with three. Just need to finish up the set up for four and then do a final once over. Hoping to post it tomorrow so it’s up before the end of the contest!

Anonymous
3/9/24, 12:22 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) AMAZING
3/8/24, 11:50 PM
I would love to read more from you! Especially more father son love stuff.
3/8/24, 11:31 PM
This is a really fun idea, but I'd love more detail! Give me more haha, great work
3/8/24, 10:22 PM
Good story -- creepy but really erotic. Well done.
3/8/24, 8:32 PM
A wonderful story ❤ hope you continue to write , for you are quite good at it.
3/8/24, 5:26 PM
so beautiful. the intimacy is just heaven-sent. WELL WRITTEN work. THANK YOU
3/8/24, 1:31 PM
Philly! Phillll ayyyy! ... Philly mention.
3/8/24, 12:56 PM
WHOA... Sammy... i want INTO the Parker Family world.