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3/8/24, 4:46 AM
Oh man I can't wait to see what the full vial does to Little Budd!

3/8/24, 12:32 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Me, either. As I've mentioned before -- at least on the Forum -- I'm "pantsing" this series. Pantsing -- making it up by the seat of your pants -- is a method I tried when writing my 3rd novel and it was HORRIBLE for me, painstakingly slow. However, in the context of a continued story, where there's no real thematic development, or rising action, it serves me well. My biggest challenge in revisiting this series was finding something for the Budd Brothers to do that would move their story along as well. Otherwise, why include them?
Anonymous
3/8/24, 12:18 AM
amazing chapter… love the individual character development… “A cig in one hand and my boy’s cock in the other” is such a horny line too!!!

3/8/24, 12:23 PM
@Anonymous To me, a cigar is a cigar. (Remember, there's a 420 in my name, and I don't like blunts.)
3/8/24, 6:32 AM
Great story!
3/8/24, 6:03 AM
Charley’s application to Mensa is going to be inconsistent at *best.* Such fun.
3/8/24, 5:58 AM
The handling of stranger’s dicks as an expression of basic humanity: a DEI program we can all get behind?
3/8/24, 5:49 AM
Plagiarism! “Like a personal trainer, but for tits.” Is the first line of my LinkedIn profile! I love the clever thing you do in the middle here, where Charley makes himself more gay by being disappointed in his own witnessed performance. Gay-upping via self-coaching. Somehow, you manage to gesture at things that could form complete mechanics for another story and have it remain artful and part of the larger story. Bravo.
3/8/24, 5:40 AM
I originally read “I came like a fuckin’ avalanche” literally, leading me to imagine a *very* oddly shaped dick. A thought almost, but not quite, as amusing as this romp. Also, the periods you have chosen to use are not properly rounded and should be replaced by periods of .031 mitering. I’m only telling you this publically because I believe in the importance of bettering oneself. ;)
3/8/24, 5:25 AM
“Was I in space? And like half a foot shorter? And dressed like a slutty farm girl?” How often have I asked myself this of a Saturday morning?
Anonymous
3/8/24, 4:35 AM
It was good at first but ruined by the diaper shit
3/8/24, 4:32 AM
This story has shades of Hellraiser/The Hell bound Heart and the Lamentation Configuration. I definitely want to see where you go with this series.