Recent Comments

Zander
6/7/25, 1:38 PM
Good start, but is this story anywhere else? Or is it only being written here?

6/7/25, 4:02 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Hi. I have not post it anywhere else.
6/7/25, 12:42 PM
Wow, can't wait for more

6/7/25, 4:02 PM
@Jonanator Thank you. Unfortunately, I have been writing this using AI and I can only post the next chapter a week after this one.
6/7/25, 3:49 PM
Sensational Centaur story! Hyped for the next chapter. Your stories are so often just lovely, which isnt something you find here very much.
6/7/25, 2:37 PM
Real hot! Moves a bit too fast though. I'd like more time to sit with the transformation, personally. Still, good job
Zander
6/7/25, 2:16 PM
I hope the plot moves forward and others realize that Manny is under control and will all follow him together and find a secret hideout where they are all turned into slaves.
Zander
6/7/25, 2:07 PM
Great story, it's a pity that it's written slowly, like others in this universe.
6/6/25, 9:36 PM
Hey this is so cool! I cannot wait to read more.

6/7/25, 1:29 PM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) Glad you like the story so far! More chapters will be forthcoming!
6/6/25, 11:11 PM
The set up is so good ! I'm hooked !

6/7/25, 1:29 PM
@[HypnoPete](/user/show/14634) Thanks! Appreciate your kind words!
Anonymous
6/6/25, 11:52 PM
I want the two next! Haha

6/7/25, 1:29 PM
@Anonymous Third chapter is up!
6/7/25, 1:19 PM
This is WILDLY interesting. You are the BEST writer I know! This guy Yosuf is BAD NEWS