Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/1/24, 4:22 AM
Can't wait to see more!
3/1/24, 3:49 AM
Damn! What a great start and interesting premise! I feel like there is so much room for unexpected twists and turns!
3/1/24, 3:19 AM
Im hooked and cant wait to read more of it.
3/1/24, 2:01 AM
Damn. That was hot
3/1/24, 1:22 AM
I tried writing a poem once and it was a boring failure. That took much metal strain , I determined that poetry wasn't my gig. You took something we are all familiar with and many know by heart, and homo-phized it. Funny and true to the Clement C. Moore's original. Rhyming everything nicely and in meter must have been a task! I know I'm late in commenting but just came across this today. I'm very impressed! TJK
2/17/24, 2:00 PM
Wow! That was incredible to read, to experience, really. You’re writing had me there, with Abe, as Abe. I thoroughly enjoyed the daydream fantasy trip in my imagination, thanks to Your imagination. Your writing effortlessly created an effect of intensifying my imagination, as I read the tale. I was completely immersed, Abe was there in the story, but I was Abe, too. It was less like reading and more like dreaming a fuzzy dream that both horrified and thrilled. I have to give You and Marius praise, you both created something real out of make believe. I read it a second time, right after finishing it. I feel blown up to huge perfectly round proportions, in a way. I’ve been experiencing some enticement toward gaining, recently, and the thing that happened here, just had my daydream fantasy was drifting me away. I’ll stop. But thank you. I am experiencing actual weight gain from the allure of the idea, before today. But right now, I’m honestly bloated and full, much more than I was.

2/29/24, 10:45 PM
@[RiverRhode](/user/show/241400) Well thank you. I'm gonna have an inflated head from such praise ;-)
2/27/24, 9:00 PM
Did a little edit to the end to really up the change Yusuf has done to the twins. Feel free to do a second read to have a bit of an expanded description of their shifted perspectives and desires!!
2/29/24, 9:44 PM
Wow. I haven’t been on here for a while. First story I read and it’s an absolute mind ride. Love it
Anonymous
2/29/24, 7:21 PM
Geeez! It feels like this theme is getting more popular, and I’ve very glad it is