Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/29/24, 1:52 PM
You know what would be hot... Claire finds out, and seeks revenge. Turning his sexy and cunning father into an asset and take control the company. Muahahaha :}
2/29/24, 12:45 PM
Your stories never disappoint. Can’t wait for part 2.
2/29/24, 10:53 AM
Another super creative story that keeps me in suspense. Awesome job and looking forward to reading more!
2/29/24, 9:18 AM
Honestly, couldn't outright have noticed the Ai writing without you having mentioned it at the beginning. (which is exciting and frightening simultaneously). Really liked the construct of the story and it progressed along really nicely. Can't wait to keep reading more and see how it evolves.
2/29/24, 7:49 AM
I love this chapter so much. Hell yes. More, more, more. Loving this world.
2/29/24, 7:25 AM
Very hot, more so because everything about this seems like it could really happen. So looking forward to seeing what else might happen! (hopefully soon!) Having Steve find the windowless playroom off the garage, and fatefully manage to get a signed agreement for multiple very flexible visits over months is extreme arousing!
2/29/24, 5:38 AM
:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Day
2/29/24, 5:37 AM
Absolutely love this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
2/8/24, 6:31 AM
Great idea. Maybe think about asking an editor for help next time.

2/9/24, 11:53 PM
@[PJ34](/user/show/2558338) Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it.

Anonymous
2/29/24, 5:18 AM
@[TUMBRELLA08](/user/show/10046127) Just some very minor edits I saw but on the whole this is very well done! Please continue!
2/29/24, 3:57 AM
Really great second chapter. I really am loving the story and a way that I didn’t expect and I am really appreciate a really well done race change transformation, written out.