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Anonymous
2/29/24, 2:24 AM
great story! love coming back to reread it.
Anonymous
2/29/24, 2:03 AM
I wish there would have been a bit more of a description of him attempting to resist the brainwashing, and his thoughts as it was all happening, rather than a before/after. Otherwise, great job!
2/28/24, 10:47 PM
Great story! Wish we'd been there the moment he broke.
2/28/24, 10:04 PM
Chris definitely should sniff and lick his so sons ass and feet. Have him clean his son’s sweaty pits with his tongue
2/28/24, 9:32 PM
Get Chris turned on my younger males; specifically bearish men. Make Eric into mature daddies. Get them as close to actual sex as possible then have them stop. They then both have to leave to a gay bar and get fucked to cum.
2/28/24, 8:54 PM
i hope with every fiber of my being that this story continues.
2/28/24, 6:29 PM
I don't know if it is too late for this, but, for the scientists and army chapter, why not make the general into a bald eagle, the national animal from the united states?

2/28/24, 8:02 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I actually tried to see what it looked like...not Horny at all haha I'm not into the whole beak thing lol I've really been struggling with this next chapter, it's not flowing well for me but hopefully will be done tomorrow. I think it will be the weakest chapter.

2/28/24, 8:06 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) that is okay, given how good this series is, the bar is pretty high, and even the "weekest" can be good, don't be so hard on yourself

2/28/24, 8:10 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Thank you for your words of support I really appreciate it. Hopefully in the next few days.

2/28/24, 8:12 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) can you give us a small teaser of what is coming up in the next chapter? I think it will help appease me and the other who are eager for the next part

2/28/24, 8:16 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) stiil, I hope things are going well for you in your life

2/28/24, 8:22 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I didn't overstep on this one? it is my anxiety disorder getting the better on me

2/28/24, 8:28 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Haha not at all don't worry. The next chapter is the army and scientists; there aren't many scientists left. The President and Dr Denard will make another appearance.

2/28/24, 8:31 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) I see, I think it will be fun, looking forewords to next part
2/28/24, 8:18 AM
Great start, well written !!

2/28/24, 8:21 PM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) Thank you! I’m only just starting to do my own stories, and I had a few that I’d already finished. Feel free to read some of my other finished stories and tell me your thoughts!
2/28/24, 7:02 PM
Nice one! I'd love to see a continuation that goes into more detail about the narrator's relationship with his "bate brothers."
2/28/24, 5:51 PM
Very hot, but part of me wants the father in law to get the same treatment.